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Reviewer: mamu2 Signed Date: 2010.09.15 - 09:19AM Title: What Happened Next

You write dialog well.

One thing...why would the DE's take Ginny to force Harry to come to rescue her? LV would only do this when he doesn't have access to Harry and Harry was right there for the taking, All Lucius had to do was say "Harry comes with us or we kill Ginny and anyone else we see." Harry would give himself up to save her life if he didn't think they could fight their way out of it.

It makes no sense to capture Ginny when Harry is the real target of LV and his biggest threat based on the Prophesy..



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.05 - 01:27PM Title: What Happened Next

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hmm, I didnt like the end



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.12.04 - 02:15AM Title: What Happened Next

Well I must say the whole marriage thing is surprising that she took it that way and Harry let her off the hook for going off like that. I don't know you had the side of GInny I really really don't like back in this chapter like her walking off with them... That didn't make sense at all I don't know I agree with the idea behind it but just don't like it lol.



Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed Date: 2008.07.28 - 12:08AM Title: What Happened Next

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Reviewer: stinky_head Signed Date: 2008.06.25 - 09:27AM Title: What Happened Next

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I like your story, I really do, but a rather large part of me absolutly loaths your Ginny. I've read other stories were Ginny is one of the most powerful characters and loved them so I know that's not it. For the most part it's her arrogance as well as her over-importance within the story.

Voldemort knows the first part of the prophecy so he knows Harry could possibly cause his down fall, so why waste so much energy on Ginny? I find it hard to believe that he would almost ignore Harry for a bit of unfinished buisness. I had thought this before but it never really became much of a problem until this chapter. Why, when they could have just as easily taken Harry, who is the one who could end Voldemort's reign, did they put so much effort into capturing Ginny? Also, Death Eaters don't strike me as an honorable lot so why didn't they take Ginny and then someone else take Harry?

In fact, I feel it so strongely that there have been many many times when I wanted to click on that tiny little 'x' in the upper right corner of my screen. The reason I haven't is actually pretty silly, I love a good love/hate romance and wanted to see how it turned out.

In the end I'll probably finish your story, and probably keep it in my favorites file, but I have to say that this is the first story I've ever read this far into where I can't stand who is paired with the main character. In this case Ginny. Still, I wish you the best of luck on any future projects you may have.

~Stinky



Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2007.12.24 - 10:37AM Title: What Happened Next

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Very good. On the edge of my seat! :)



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.12.24 - 08:45AM Title: What Happened Next

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well thats a real kick in the balls and now they have to get this over with but then they can have forever...ginny knows she can go all the way qith harry she just not likeing the thought of it not happening....kutgw merry christmas



Reviewer: i_lay_my_head_down Signed Date: 2007.12.24 - 05:55AM Title: What Happened Next

Ahhh what an adventure!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Update soon please!



Reviewer: i_lay_my_head_down Signed Date: 2007.12.24 - 05:55AM Title: What Happened Next

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Ahhh what an adventure!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Update soon please!



Reviewer: berni Signed Date: 2007.12.24 - 05:46AM Title: What Happened Next

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argh!! ginny, ginny, ginny...why?
awesome chapter!



Reviewer: Evie_S Signed Date: 2007.12.24 - 03:53AM Title: What Happened Next

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ahh! Ginny's gone!

I read this at ff.net the other day and then had to wait til it was posted here til I could review!

Great chapter, I have no doubts that Harry will find Ginny (sorry) and (hopefully) kick Voldy's arse.

Update soon!

Evie
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Reviewer: ReneeGinSoftie Signed Date: 2007.12.24 - 02:01AM Title: What Happened Next

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i love this keep it up and harry has to save ginny



Reviewer: ParadoxalSaint Signed Date: 2007.12.23 - 11:14PM Title: What Happened Next

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oh. bloody. hell. the shit is about to hit the fan isn't it? (if it hasn't already...)




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