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Reviewer: mamu2 Signed Date: 2010.09.14 - 03:49PM Title: Unfinished Business

[quote] He should have been devastated that they’d been able to hurt each other this much[/quote]


Yes, he should have. That he wasn't is very disconcerting.

[quote]Ginny knew she had started this fight because she’d hoped they could physically beat the hate and anger out of each other.[/quote]


That's completely dysfunctional,even for angsty teenagers. You've reduced them to cruel, violent abusive, vindictive sociopaths instead of sympathetic characters and made them extremely unlikeable.


Was that the intent?


Love is not violent, these two people should never get together.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.04 - 06:56PM Title: Unfinished Business

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that was certainly a violent chapter
glad its over



Reviewer: harrypgirl Signed Date: 2009.02.16 - 10:37PM Title: Unfinished Business

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Okay I was reading this and I felt like I had heard something like this before. Then I went down stairs to watch BattleStar Galactica re-runs and there was this episode that seemed much like this and it was also titled unfinished Business. I guess my question is did you base this chapter of of that episode of BSG???
Just wanted to know.



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.12.03 - 05:14AM Title: Unfinished Business

Damn you... I don't know I like it there is no doubt about it BUT I said before that you need to keep the fight going or have them get together you didn't really say for sure in this if this is I missed you lets be friends Harry while I continue to be a bitch and break your heart than I don't like it. IF this is I missed you I am sorry I made such a huge mistake take me back lets be together than damn good chapter. Though I will say your super Ginny you haven't mentioned it in awhile I will just say I don't really like the idea of her being to powerful I don't know how to explain it other than saying some people do Super Ginny and that is what you have and just have to remind them it is Harry Potter story not a Ginny Weasley story. But regardless great job and you are making this dang hard for me to go to bed like I planned after this chap.



Reviewer: runnerman87 Signed Date: 2008.07.22 - 01:34PM Title: Unfinished Business

You know, if Ginny can win even an exchange against Harry, then there's no way he can beat Voldemort. All it would take is one spell to land and he'd be dead.



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2008.07.18 - 07:24PM Title: Unfinished Business

Damn that was UGLY. It was good that each other them was able to get out all their anger and frustration but at what cost. Great chapter.



Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp Signed Date: 2007.12.10 - 07:31PM Title: Unfinished Business

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aww!!! the ending was awsome :]



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.12.10 - 05:47PM Title: Unfinished Business

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well now that they are relally to gerther and with out any more interference it should allow them to move on now....albus should not have meddel in it but the gambeled worked....kutgw



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.12.10 - 03:18PM Title: Unfinished Business

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well dumbledore is a bloody genius!

CodeRomance



Reviewer: NYC10016 Signed Date: 2007.12.10 - 07:19AM Title: Unfinished Business

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parking my post at another HP fanfic site over here too for this fic deserves all the reviews & accolades:
dear Iluvfanfics, wow!!!! genuinely loads of thanks for the dedication though i'm certain there are other loyal & far more indepth fanfic readers who totally delight on your works deserving of such "special mention" besides me, your stressed out slave-of-Wall-st. what sets you absolutely apart from all other H&G fanfic writers is your willingness to "push the envelope" in all levels of style & ways of tackling the varying angles of H&G relationship and being true to your vision regardless of backlash from H&G readers -- a bit like Her Worship JoKR who writes for herself first before satifying others. i'm one of the soooo few who delights on the angst/fluff of H&G relationship - the angst angle Her Worship JoKR never hedged. i've been feeding my thirst via excellent H&G fanfics. in my current short list there are only a handful of H&G fanfic authors who've raised the H&G fanfics in gazillion levels: from making certain it's believable in canon or if AU, it's still plaussible in HP world of Her Worship JoKR - to name a few of my all-time-faves: SaraEk's Save Me (every word of the story), PrincessPotter's One Look (that last all-shouting chapter & then the lust/luv of H&G really got me big time and musing for d-a-y-s!) and you Iluvfanfics for having bodily, mentally & emotionally penned intentional hurt/anger/despair/angst in one H&G fanfic plus fluff/luv!!! on to the glorious fluff and kicking Voldemort's a** with loads of H&G luv&devotion in the succeeding chapters but i am certain this ride will just get rougher & tougher for our boy&girl! all the best from NYC!



Reviewer: cherrion Signed Date: 2007.12.10 - 02:50AM Title: Unfinished Business

IGNORE MY REVIEW. i DIDNT SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!



Reviewer: cherrion Signed Date: 2007.12.10 - 02:38AM Title: Unfinished Business

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I really likes those chapters, But I dont believe you, It is nearly the end of year 7 and they arent together yet. Even in this chapter, they are still just friends. What is it, just as Voldemort is dueling with harry they decide to get together, but then either Ginny of Harry is tragically Killed.


good chapters though!



Reviewer: onibaku Signed Date: 2007.12.10 - 12:26AM Title: Unfinished Business

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ohhh, what a fight, thats and interesting way or reconciliation, hehe



Reviewer: Belcris Signed Date: 2007.12.09 - 11:29PM Title: Unfinished Business

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I remember that scene from BSG and it works wonderfully here as well. :) Great chapter. :) Chris



Reviewer: mwoo41 Signed Date: 2007.12.09 - 10:25PM Title: Unfinished Business

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Reviewer: Danna Signed Date: 2007.12.09 - 10:21PM Title: Unfinished Business

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It's great.

Can wait to read their make up!

Bye,

Danna




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