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Reviewer: My Wicked Quill Signed Date: 2010.06.05 - 10:27PM Title: The End of Silence

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i was wrong.
it was much much worse than that. i can't believe it!!! y???????? it was a beautiful chapter, so full of love i wanted to cry and then so quickly tainted so dark hate was the only thing left
im depressed



Reviewer: Count Westwest Signed Date: 2009.08.13 - 11:27PM Title: The End of Silence

This makes absolutely no sense whatsoever. Ginny knows the damn prophesy... Voldemort will want to kill Harry regardless of who he is dating or who he loves. It might be forgivable for her to walk away from Harry for some noble stupidity (you portray her as clueless moron after all)... but for her to make up with Dean the next day is so low and base, Harry would have to be a eunuch with no self- respect to take her back... Oh I forgot... the Harry in this story is a eunuch with no self respect. These two idiots deserve each other. This is where I stop reading.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.04 - 06:49PM Title: The End of Silence

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wow, very intesnse chapter - in more ways than one



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.12.03 - 04:24AM Title: The End of Silence

Encore great job remarkable job this right here is the same level as I think chapter 14 on the contary I am not even mad at all I am damn happy. YOU have made your Ginny into the worlds biggest bitch and to tell you the truth I am damn happy that you have Harry finally treating her like she deserves to be treated to tell you the truth. I can only hope to the good god above that you don't just go and make this a one chapter thing the only and only way I will accept that is if your going to get them together the next chapter.

ON the points in the chapter I agree with Harry yeah I know where he is coming from for the ego boost but he does have to drop her. I don't know about the pulling Harry around like a puppy though I don't think he would allow it though it did let you have an arguement and show Ginny as a (bad word) so I am more than willing to let that slide. I do like the Harry as A head boy great job there as well. I really like Harry going to Dumbledore and trying to have her removed the only thing that I wish you would of done is go farther with and by that I mean that I wish you would of had Harry resign or something along those lines I don't know if it was me and I have been in this posistion before not exactly like it no mad man trying to kill me but I don't know if you have been hurt that bad or if it is that I am just a prat but I would of quit the club make Dumbledore choose between the two I really really love that you have had Harry grow a pair I won't lie about that. Also got to love firewhisky since that got us over this hump.

PLEASE don't make Harry bend back to Ginny and let her still treat him like shit PLEASE!!!!!!

But amazing job this is why you have won award I think for chapters like this.



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2008.07.18 - 07:23PM Title: The End of Silence

OK I'm feeling so many things right now. Joy that they finally confess how they feel and gave in to their love, ok their lust for each other. FINALLY. Upset that Ginny threw it all away and broke Harry's heart. Confuse that's she back with Dean, that's just cruel. Dean really likes her and he doesn't deserve to be treated this way. Ginny is just being selfish. Then there's Harry he's so hurt that he's going to make the same mistake with Partavi. Come on they shouldn't drag other people into mess up love life. I think Harry is right Ginny is letting Tom control her and that's just wrong.



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.03.27 - 02:44PM Title: The End of Silence

This is more like it I hate the fighting of course but it is how it should of been Ginny's fault liek it was all along not Harry's maybe it is just a guy thing and im just taking his side but to me if your going to make them fight at least make the right person look like the bad guy



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 07:15PM Title: The End of Silence

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some times this needs to happen in order to work all the kinks out and get back on track,,,,,this was fun to read and i bet fun to write.....kutgw



Reviewer: Adam Bloodraven Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 06:23AM Title: The End of Silence

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I feel compelled to write a review for this chapter... so I will.

First and foremost, I would like to thank you for the three part update (Not many updates for stories that I read as of late and as a result I'm going a little batty).
Secondly, I would also like to thank you for providing me with some inspiration. While that is not all that hard (As I get inspired by just about everything I read) you have actually given me the means to solve something in one of my own stories. You see, I love to write, but mostly its just random writing. However, when I do try to write a story, it usually devolves around one point or another in the story and ends up becoming something that I cannot overcome and actually finish (Which is why I plot everything out before hand).

Recently, I have been plotting a story out, that would be my first real foray into the realm of HP fanfiction. However, two days ago, as per usual, I ran aground upon a point where I couldn't figure out how to proceed. But, because of this chapter, I have found inspiration as to what I need to have happen (Ironically, just yesterday I watched the episode of Battlestar Galactica that you said much of this was taken from and it didn't help at all).

That is about it for now. Expectt a review on the next chapter, perhaps tomorrow. However, considering that it is 4:30 in the morning, I should probably be going to sleep now and finishing reading tomorrow.

Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Wow! What a lovely review! Thank you so much! I'm glad you've worked your way out of your writer's block and am even more flattered that my chapter had something to do with it. I wish you continued luck in your story and can't wait to read it when it's finished! (Really? You didn't get anything from that episode of BSG? Cause *sigh* I love it. So dramatic and angsty and emotional.)



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.12.10 - 03:05PM Title: The End of Silence

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you know you lied you said chapter 20 was going to be the chapter they got together...well some get together that was! bull shit if you ask me. Ginny is a weak person and Harry's right she is a coward a big one!

CodeRomance



Reviewer: onibaku Signed Date: 2007.12.10 - 12:05AM Title: The End of Silence

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nooooooo, damn tom and **********, damn it, poor ginny and harry, he has break them apart. damn it



Reviewer: Belcris Signed Date: 2007.12.09 - 11:14PM Title: The End of Silence

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Bravo! Amazing! Fantastic! I could go on but I have to get to the next chapter... like right now. :) Chris



Reviewer: Danna Signed Date: 2007.12.09 - 10:20PM Title: The End of Silence

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Hi again,

I really can't hate you. You almost cause me a heart attack, but well i can survive.

This is heartbreaking!

Please go ahead....

Danna




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