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Reviewer: My Wicked Quill Signed Date: 2011.12.19 - 05:21PM Title: The Yule Ball This must be the third time I've read this novel. I always come back to it. I live it that much!!! Reviewer: My Wicked Quill Signed Date: 2010.06.05 - 03:19PM Title: The Yule Ball holy crap. i...wasn't expecting that. HArry he...he...hit her? i...wow Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.02 - 06:22PM Title: The Yule Ball oh, excellent chapter Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.12.01 - 04:39AM Title: The Yule Ball Well........ I don't know............ My postion has been made pretty clear..... To tell you the honest to god truth I hated it BUT only for the reason that right now I am hoping to god that you move down a dark path I know you won't but alas I have read so many fan fics that I can't help but love orignality I mean heck not to many are dark and you have the perfect turning point. I was to thrilled that you did that like I said anything after Yule Ball is just stringing it along if you would of had Harry just starting to act like you have since the beginning than that would buy you a few years of stringing along right now we both now they like each and Ginny is just stupid really I guess. LOL god I feel bad I love the story but can't help but whine about the things that bug me crap I say don't even read my reviews if you have been already. Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2008.07.18 - 07:04PM Title: The Yule Ball Oh no I can't believe such a beautiful and magical evening turned out so ugly. Even though I think Ginny's right, for dancing with Michael she did go to the ball with Harry. She should have at least taken that into account. Then the next day she was free to see whomever she choose to see. Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.03.27 - 07:34AM Title: The Yule Ball Well I usually wait till I read the story completly till I review yes I know thats kinda rude but as I am somewhat new to fan fics and still reading through all the completed ones rather than be impatiant waiting for updates. But on too why I decided to review is usually to complain your story is very good that is for sure so far I cant stop reading you have made a wonderful world. Now why I have decided to review is because of the whole Harry kinda looking like a prat there with ginny going off with Corner maybe its a Guy against Girl thing I don't know but alot of ppl have gone this way making harry look alot like a prat. But to me its Ginny who has crossed the line not Harry you have him feeling sorry for something he shouldn't of she crossed the line yes I understand how you set her up as second choice and all but still that is something that shouldn't be done her running off with another person. I don't know I go off on a rant that really prob won't effect the story much at all I just felt it was a ceap shot on Harry and kinda guys in general I have been in this postion and I certainly didn't take to kindly to it and have no regrets for my actions and nor should Harry. (well other than the hitting thing. That might of been a little to much but i still trust you.) Just made me a little angry by spinning it on to him. Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2008.01.06 - 06:01PM Title: The Yule Ball I have read your story right up to the current last chapter (29). I love it, and noticed your notes at the beginning of Chapter 10 signalled a lot of grumpy readers. This is why I feel compelled to come back and review this chapter myself. One reason, is that it really hacks me off when people leave negative feedback. Up until this chapter there are a handful of reviews for each one, and hey presto, there are 28 of them for this chapter! If you were happy to read the previous chapters (and the evidence of you all is that you have read them) BUT NOT leave any positive feedback for the author, then what gives you the right to sound off negatively now? That's just a reflection on how sad our society is these days: COMPLAIN, COMPLAIN, COMPLAIN. Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2007.12.11 - 09:37AM Title: The Yule Ball I vacillated on whether to submit this review as I don't like to critisize, but I presume you want feedback on your story. This chapter is totally bizarre. Not only are G/H totally out of character (not just to the books, but to the way you have written them in previous chapters), but to have them sink to the level of emotional and physical abuse is completely unacceptable. I am afraid your betas and your moderator let you down badly on this. The story is over for me, as it would be in the real world because no relationship could continue after this. Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.12.01 - 09:00PM Title: The Yule Ball gosh harry thats almost as bad as ron and hermione! maybe even worse! your both denying your feelings! arggg on you all! lol! great chapter! Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.12.01 - 08:59PM Title: The Yule Ball gosh harry thats almost as bad as ron and hermione! maybe even worse! your both denying your feelings! arggg on you all! lol! great chapter! Reviewer: Old Fart Signed Date: 2007.11.24 - 03:37PM Title: The Yule Ball I liked it up to this point. Even if Ginny was a bit too "ghetto" for my taste. But the punching each other thing was over the top. I'm sorry but that ruined the story for me.... Reviewer: ttestagr Signed Date: 2007.11.08 - 08:27AM Title: The Yule Ball I have a problem with this chapter. It seems to me that you're trying too hard to keep Harry and Ginny's relationship close to canon. The way you set up Ginny with Michael Corner, it was jarring and seemed out of place. Harry's thoughts and feelings up to that point were progessing smoothly, no hint of worry or concern about his attraction to his friend. And then when Michael Corner shows up, he just shunts her off to him like she's a leper? Reviewer: moshpit Signed Date: 2007.11.06 - 11:38PM Title: The Yule Ball I think the point that was not emphasized enough in my prior review is that your story prior to the chapter of the Yule Ball does not support the actions that occur during that chapter. It's the equivalent of having Dumbledore and McGonagall walk into that chapter, and having Malfoy and Snape walk out. It's not that your story is AU or the characters are OOC for canon. It's that they are completely OOC for their natures in this story as it was constructed prior to those events. Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2007.11.06 - 02:25PM Title: The Yule Ball well this story started out well eneugh evan though the jumps in time between the chapter were a little long as it dint give eneugh senses of the build up in frendship between harry & ginny & ii will admit that certan of ginnys charecter trait wernt very apeeling although they dindt relly show themselvs until the start of year 4 ie being very good at poker why it just dosnt firt into the story at all & seamed to be put in soly to show how goood she was at hidding stuff plus her casully use of cursing something iam sure molly wouldt have left unpunsed.. then last chapter we get to see ginny stand by & give harry surport so i wasnt to worried in the direction this fic wa haded ie go to the ball together become slightly closer & prehaps start datting towards the end of the year but this chapter has pretty much ruined any cance of that for starters you gave no indication that cho was in the picture so i was rather surprised that harry went to her first after all if he gets on so well with ginny why bother with cho. Reviewer: GypsyWeasley Signed Date: 2007.11.06 - 01:05AM Title: The Yule Ball Lemme just preface my review with this...I normally really don't like revisionist stories like yours. The ones where history changes and Ginny is friends with Harry all along. It always seems to change the story, or Ron or Hermione change from who they are, or Ginny is a super-Ginny and totally unrealistic. Reviewer: Trance Starr Signed Date: 2007.11.06 - 12:40AM Title: The Yule Ball I knopw this looks very bad for Harry right now but I do hope that Ginny recieves at least SOME of the blame for kindof ditching him at the ball. | |||||||
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