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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed
Date: 2016.01.16 - 03:21PM
Title: Yuletide
And men claim that women like to gossip.
Reviewer: Blissful Oblivion Signed
Date: 2012.06.14 - 02:37AM
Title: Yuletide
Oh, I'm glad Ron's okay. I find it a bit weird that Ron's never told Hermione he loves her before. Looks like Harry got into trouble at the buck's party. I loved Charlie's line about the Weasley brothers being too drunk and hung over to beat Harry up.
Reviewer: Blissful Oblivion Signed
Date: 2012.06.03 - 02:02AM
Title: Yuletide
Good chapter. I loved the way you described the love all of the couples at the Burrow have for each other. Harry revealed everything to Ginny's brothers - he really shouldn't have gone drinking. I loved Charlie's lines when he said he and his brothers were too drunk and too hung over to beat Harry up.
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed
Date: 2010.02.22 - 06:33PM
Title: Yuletide
I'm so glad that Ron and Bill found the missing dads and what-not.
Reviewer: pottermania Signed
Date: 2010.02.04 - 05:54PM
Title: Yuletide
I giggled at the night at Bill's but I laughed VERY loudly aloud at the closing sentence!
Thanks for giving me a HUGE laugh just when I needed it most:-)
Author's Response: You're welcome :)
Reviewer: annep Signed
Date: 2008.11.19 - 04:51PM
Title: Yuletide
Is 12 Grimmauld Place/Sirius House visible all the time now? Gilbert ran up the street to find the house so it sounds like there’s no longer any Fidelius spell on it. Wonder what the muggle neighbors think about a mysteriously appearing house!
The conversation between Ginny and Angelina, when the Christmas Eve wedding was announced, was perfect—true to the characters and the situation. Also wonderful was Harry’s contemplation of the couples showing their love for each other.
What was wrong with Molly in the scene where everyone was cleaning for the wedding? She was so perceptive and understanding when talking with Harry about his relationship with Ginny in chapter 37 then she’s totally dense and tactless when pushing George about a best man. This was the only thing I didn’t like about the chapter because Molly seemed so out of character; of course no one but Fred could be George’s best man. To balance the complaint, the wedding preparations speak volumes about the Weasley family. Even though it’s a “shotgun wedding”, they’re happy to gain a daughter/sister and are eager to put on a full-blown ceremony and reception with not even a thought to hush it up.
Thanks for another great, long chapter!
Author's Response: Arthur and Harry discuss that Flitwick took all the charms off the house. The Muggles were confounded to think there was always a number 12. There was nothing wrong with Molly. She was trying to make a perfect wedding so it blocked her perceptions about anything else. She tries too hard to make it normal is all. It's not OOC really, she wasn't thinking about that she was thinking weddings not George. *shrugs* It didn't occur to me that they'd hush it up - Malfoys would I bet :D . Not our Weasleys!
Reviewer: HallowedGriffin Signed
Date: 2008.11.18 - 07:53PM
Title: Yuletide
Oh, almost forgot the rating!
Reviewer: HallowedGriffin Signed
Date: 2008.11.18 - 07:51PM
Title: Yuletide
Superb!
The story gets better every chapter.
Would really love to read more but no rush though.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! It won't be too long - if all goes according to plan!
Reviewer: pearlythepirate Signed
Date: 2008.11.17 - 07:59PM
Title: Yuletide
Wow. Started about 4 days ago. Could not put this amazing story down! My GPA will hate me for this, but it was COMPLETELY worth it!
Thanks for an amazing story, keep the awesomeness coming!
Author's Response: My own GPA may have suffered at the hands of this fic *looks sheepish* Hopefully there is an update soon :D
Reviewer: arabear Signed
Date: 2008.11.09 - 12:25AM
Title: Yuletide
loved it. Can't wait for the next one no matter how long it takes :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Harrylovesginny Signed
Date: 2008.11.06 - 02:49PM
Title: Yuletide
This is a great story. I had to keep reading all the chapters just like when I read JK Rowlings stories. Keep it up! one of the best I have read so far. hope the next chapter is up soon.
I know this is your story but just a note: why not make Harry start recruiting for aurors at howgarts. when he teaches dada's. it will help him stop worrying about not helping out.
Author's Response: The next chapter is with my beta and she will release it ... well ... when she feels like it! ROFLOL
Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed
Date: 2008.11.05 - 07:40AM
Title: Yuletide
i enjoyed all the banter with the weasley's and harry - i thought it was funny! and percy and sex - he needs to get some! haha
i can't wait to see what else you have in store, i am really enjoying your story! you have such a good fluid writing style! x
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I hope it continues to be enjoyable!
Reviewer: mia2223 Signed
Date: 2008.11.05 - 03:43AM
Title: Yuletide
Gr8 story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: frg234 Signed
Date: 2008.11.04 - 10:29PM
Title: Yuletide
“Ha!” George crowed, standing unsteadily. “I knew it would take her longer than that to convince him to give it up!”
“Did you know that Dad tells you to wait and Mum tells you to be careful?” Ron asked the room at large.
Classic lines!! Not quite as good as the "generous purse" from earlier in the story......but darn funny male bonding session.
Telling the guys to wait. The girl gets told to be safe/careful. It seems so backwards socially speaking, but it seems so Weasley! I don't know this from experience, but it seems that it would be difficult to take someone else's characters write an orignial plot, yet keep true to the characters. You make it look so easy. Your story allows us to continue to read about characters we know and love. I read other stories that seem to just use their names and completely change who they are. Great chapter / Great story overall!!
Author's Response: Yeah ... I like to turn things on their head *grins*. I'm glad you are enjoying my story and the characters :D
Reviewer: phunt Signed
Date: 2008.11.04 - 01:07AM
Title: Yuletide
Wow. I just finished a 4 day marathon of reading this entire story. I have probably spent more time reading than sleeping. And it was worth it. I even traveled to my in-laws and snuck onto their computer so that I could continue reading.
This chapter was awesome! The male bonding was neat, but I personally love the Sirius House stuff. It is so touching to see the way Harry is putting it to use. It just wouldn't see right if Harry had to try to live there himself. And this ia a great way to put it to use.
But alas, I have reached the end and am forced to wait for the first time. I know the wait will be worth it. Thanks for sharing this story and for keeping Harry's story alive!
Author's Response: You know ... sleep is overrated ...
Reviewer: Kaspi Signed
Date: 2008.11.03 - 08:38PM
Title: Yuletide
I love it!!! I especially like the whole male bonding time between harry and the weasleys. The Percy-untying-his-shoes thing cracked me up. I couldn't stop laughing!
Author's Response: Poor, poor Percy ... :D He's so ... proper.
Reviewer: wotcherberta Signed
Date: 2008.11.02 - 07:42PM
Title: Yuletide
aww how cute :)
i loved the bonding session between the weasley brothers and harry, they were all such funny drunks.
i don't mind the wait because these story is so good and well written.
i'm sorry that i haven't been reviewing in a while, i've been caught up in several different stories at once.
but i promise from now on that i will be reviewing for every chapter :)
very very s c a n d a l o u s :)
Author's Response: What is scandalous??? I'm glad you don't mind the wait - that's a very good thing right now! lol
Reviewer: sagefemme Signed
Date: 2008.11.02 - 04:53PM
Title: Yuletide
What an excellent reward, AN UPDATE! October was my crazy-mama month. Costumes to put together for my four little witches and wizards, church meetings to host, a home to turn into a Burrow for a killer 1st Annual Burrow Bash, a Molly sweater to crochet, wands to carve, food to make, and at the end of it all, an update from Kezza, thoughtfully provided by our precious Jen, who is gifted in knowing how to keep us *all* happy.
I hope that the end of November finds our Kezza having a good rest with a treat as great as the one she's given me, by having this update posted today!
No best man...had me in tears, too. I love the found wizards. It's good to have some 'happy thoughts" of the reunited families in there to balance out the references to how the school year was for the kids at school.
Author's Response: Indeed the balance was necessary! Enjoy your rest! :P
Reviewer: GinnySavesHarry1998 Signed
Date: 2008.11.02 - 10:46AM
Title: Yuletide
Haha... cute, very cute. The chapters are worth the wait b/c I love this story, and when I get anxious for more, I just go back and read from the beginning again. :-) I'm not kidding either. X-) So don't fret yourself. We all have other things going on, and if there are some who don't understand that, then that's their sad problem. Cheers!
Author's Response: Read away then! lol
Reviewer: Yolis7 Signed
Date: 2008.11.02 - 12:50AM
Title: Yuletide
Hey Kezza, how are you..i hope you are ok..i love ur story..it the greates..in this site..i wait..for urs..to come..out..u rule..i just got to this chapter..i have not read it..but will soon..i read the last one..it was so great..love it..now i get to read this one..yay..will pray..for u to do ur daughters coustoms...have fun..many hugs..to yah..
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying the story so much. Hugs back to you! :D
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