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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.12 - 07:24PM Title: Flight

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People never really think about the after effects of a war. This story is doing a brilliant job of showing what could happen next.



Reviewer: Blissful Oblivion Signed Date: 2012.05.20 - 04:56AM Title: Flight

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Good chapter. The emotions you made me experience were quite staggering. Dean was really insensitive, talking about his sufferings in front of Harry, who has clearly lost the most in the war.Malfoy admitting he has never beaten Harry in a duel was interesting and did Harry really feel concerned for Draco before Ron arrived? Ron just can't seem to stay away from Hogwarts - Harry and Ginny really need to stop disappearing to put him at ease. I hope the four boys find the lost Muggleborns. Harry's definitely in huge trouble with Ginny.



Reviewer: I_heart_Reading Signed Date: 2010.07.02 - 12:34AM Title: Flight

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Ok you have turned me into a total Weasley fangirl. Ok well a Weasley MALE fangirl. I have always LOVED Ron. To see what he has to deal with his brothers all alone. So sad. I cry almost everytime George is around it's soo sad. Thank you for adding Bill and Charlie and even Percy. I'm starting to understand them and I heart you for giving them to us in a way that makes you love them. The think you are very canony.(?) and because of that I realize I don't like Ginny. She either is acting like a brat or the other b word. I'm hoping by the end of the fic I get her because right now not feeling the whole Ginny/Harry ship. It's scary cuz this is my first Ginny/Harry fic

Author's Response: I hope you like Ginny later ... I really do. Here's hoping you continue to enjoy the fic :)



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2010.02.17 - 12:59PM Title: Flight

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But I can't imagine Ginny being mad at Harry for leaving, more at the others for making him.



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.01.31 - 01:45PM Title: Flight

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Not heard much about the new seventh year Gryffindor boys.

Ron's not doing well staying away is he!

Harry simply cant be at Hogwarts and not have a mission!.



Reviewer: kash2110 Signed Date: 2008.10.19 - 09:54PM Title: Flight

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Well the new DADA teacher is hiding something or else Minerva is????

Like how you've written Neville, the war would have chnaged him. I just think all he ever was lacking was confidence!

There is something strange about Draco though" What's he upto?? Zabini I can understand, his mother probably taught him to observe a person to find the weakness as she did with her 7 husbands!!!!

God, I'm really into this story, it's almost like reading the 8th book!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it :) Indeed ... what might Draco be up to ... will we ever know ...



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.09.15 - 11:32PM Title: Flight

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Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed Date: 2008.08.14 - 03:30AM Title: Flight

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Reviewer: m4rk6 Signed Date: 2008.08.05 - 04:34PM Title: Flight

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Eh. The story's going great, then you kill the momentum.
Harry's finally gotten his shit together, then he breaks down. If you're going by the healing process, the one mentioned in the beginning chapters, then he should be healing already, but with all the relapsing going on, makes me wonder why he isn't crazy yet.

Author's Response: Healing is never clean and easy and there are always relapses. Stress and trauma will do that to you, Harry's still adjusting and was pushed to the edge. he also gets over it within a few hours. I felt it was a reasonable break down. I wouldn't call the momentum killed just yet. This is what healing is like - stop, start, stop start ... I don't use swear words in my story and would appreciate not receiving them in reviews. Thank you.



Reviewer: Ima Quidditch Fan Signed Date: 2008.05.29 - 11:46PM Title: Flight

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Reviewer: Yolis7 Signed Date: 2008.04.18 - 11:35PM Title: Flight

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Love it..keep the great job..

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: santafe Signed Date: 2008.04.17 - 03:43PM Title: Flight

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This whole series is great. Don't know if my reviews get through tho' - every one I post the site lobs me out. Still in the hopes that it gets through..

Thankyou for this. I have enjoyed every chapter, and I really believe that the whole fic captures something really important.

Author's Response: Well this one got through! :D I'm glad you are enjoying the story thanks for taking the time to let me know :)



Reviewer: wave Signed Date: 2008.04.16 - 04:25AM Title: Flight

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Nice chapter... so do we expect another foreign adventure?

Author's Response: There is not one on the cards ... although it was fun! :D



Reviewer: twinsmom Signed Date: 2008.04.07 - 02:03PM Title: Flight

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Good Grief!! What is wrong with the adults? These kids ALL obviously are in need of some stellar counselling! Can't they see that? Mercy!

I really love this story! You bring out a lot of thoughts and emotions in me until I start believing the people actually exist! I find myself blurting things out- kinda like yelling at the television. The reference to the cracks in the walls of Hogwarts was my favorite. Hope Hermione or someone reveals the pain all these kids are going thru. Muggle studies will only help so much! ;)

Can't wait to find out why Malfoy was apparently hiding in the hall and all the other lovely ideas you seem to have for this story. It's my favorite post DH pre-eppy story. You seem to be touching on everything. Great job!



Author's Response: I think the adults know the pain, I don't think anyone's hiding it at all. But if they all trotted off to a counsellor where would my story go? :P I am glad you are enjoying the story let's hope it stays that way! *author scurries off to write good things*



Reviewer: blackwritingquill Signed Date: 2008.04.06 - 04:49PM Title: Flight

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An awesome chapter--chock full of drama and angst. Keep up the good work, and update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you. The chapter will take as long as it takes ... would that good wishes could speed it up lol.



Reviewer: Phoeness Signed Date: 2008.04.06 - 12:50PM Title: Flight

Hi ! It’s a very good chapter !
I loved the scenes and the action there were during Harry’s first DADA lesson, and how Harry was stressed and calmed by Ginny.
Malfoy is different... I like his evolution but that sounds strange... Is he getting wiser and cordial with Harry ? I’m looking forward to see how you will develop his behavior.

It is strange for “Cat hat’ to act like he do with Harry. I wonder why he seems to not like him... It isn’t like a fear...
You had a good idea with the plot about Gerald and Gilbert’s father. I’ve been waiting for that ! It was also interesting to speak about Dean’s story and his run at that moment.

Good job ! I’m impatient to read the next chapter !

Author's Response: I don't know bout Malfoy getting wiser, exactly but he certainly seems to be more cordial, yes. And Cat Hat ... yes what is going on with him? Interesting ...

I'm impatient to read the next chapter too :P



Reviewer: elaithin Signed Date: 2008.04.06 - 09:42AM Title: Flight

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Very, very interesting. Good job in pointing out Dean and Ginny's history. Heh. Awkward much?


I really, really like the way you've tackled everyone trying to move on, from Harry and Ron's determination to find the boys' father (I knew something was going to happen there!), to Dean flipping out, to Ron's 'saving-people-thing' being as bad as Harry's now, and even Draco's bitter self-loathing. It's all wonderfully thought out, and you tell it without the angst becoming oppressive.

Oh, and Gerald is a little toe-rag. Seriously.

Great job! - Patrick

Author's Response: Poor Gerald, troubled kid and all! Ron has managed to get a bit of a saving people thing hasn't he? ROFLOL I'm glad it appears well thought out - there are days I am certain it's the least thought out thing I've done! lol



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2008.04.05 - 08:08PM Title: Flight

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Nice one!

Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Glad yu liked it. Next chapter *is* half done ... unfortunately the maths assignments are *not* half done so it will still be two weeks or more - at least. :(



Reviewer: GryffindorGal87 Signed Date: 2008.04.05 - 07:54PM Title: Flight

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“Damn shame the Fat Lady’s gone and I’m stuck out here then, isn’t it?” That is my new favorite line! LOL! Another great chapter! I can't wait for the next one. =]

Author's Response: LOL Sometimes I have moments that crack even myself up!



Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.04.05 - 03:27PM Title: Flight

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that was an amazing chapter!!!! can't wait to see what harry and co do! plus i am liking the new "depth" to malfoy!!!! can't wait to read more!!!!

Author's Response: I can't wait either!!!!!!!!! :P Thanks for reading and reviewing!




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