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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed
Date: 2016.01.11 - 06:39PM
Title: Return
I hope Ginny shares her thoughts and feelings about returning to Hogwarts.
Reviewer: Blissful Oblivion Signed
Date: 2012.05.14 - 04:16AM
Title: Return
Poor Ginny. I hope she's still with Hagrid when Harry gets there. I thought the way you wrote about the students' fear of returning to Hogwarts was quite wonderful. I love Dexter, Othello and Hamish, and probably Gilbert as well. The scene with the toad causing the choas was quite funny and I was laughing when the hat ended up on Flitwick's head.
Reviewer: chelsealeann Signed
Date: 2010.07.22 - 03:09PM
Title: Return
"Harry felt apprehensive yet at the same time he felt at peace; as if he was drifting unanchored on a calm sea"
Amazing sentence. LOVED IT!!!
Great chapter
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed
Date: 2010.02.16 - 02:11PM
Title: Return
Curse you! Now my co-workers, who previously were friendly enough, give me too wide of a berth when they walk past my office. That train ride was just too much! Your Luna is hilarious!
Anyway, very interesting--it must be horrendously hard for everyone to adjust (with the exception of Seamus) to being back at school.
Author's Response: Ah ... the risks you take when you read fanfiction in public... LOL
Reviewer: pottermania Signed
Date: 2010.01.30 - 07:45PM
Title: Return
I was interested in the Harry's thoughts about Liberty and how it's hard to bond with a new pet. My cat died (we had had him 14 years) and even after two years with our new cat I still miss Snoopy (kids wanted to watch videos of themselves from five years ago tonight and he's in the thick of everything that went on) and wish Barney was more like him.
Yet another thing that I had never thought of....how Harry not being at Hogwarts last year would mean he has no idea of the kind of things that the other students, who were, would be particularly sensitive to. I also felt sorry for the thestrals with all the insulting comments about them bein disgusting and ugly to look at...poor things!
Author's Response: The issue of binding with Liberty came about after a conversation with my beta, goingbacktosquareone who lost her dog the day Deathly hallows was released. It's not a feeling I have ever experienced despite having a number of pets. I gather I am not an animal person ... but I'm glad I pulled it off. Kudos to gbtso for it though!
Reviewer: kash2110 Signed
Date: 2008.10.19 - 07:34PM
Title: Return
God, I just LOVE LUNA, you've written her PERFECTLY!! The conversation in the prefects carriage was side splittingly funny!!!!
Malfoy's arrogance knows no bounds, but judging from the stock he came from quite understandable.
I wonder who these new teachers are and the new Head of House for Gryffindor, as Minerva's now headmistress, she can't be Head of House?
Ah well onto the next thrilling installment of one if the best HP fanfics ever to find out!!
Author's Response: LUNA ... love her ... hopefully all those questions were answered in future instalments ... ;)
Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed
Date: 2008.08.14 - 03:30AM
Title: Return
No Review
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed
Date: 2008.04.21 - 02:00PM
Title: Return
Sounds a bit like Gerald and Gilbert are mini Colin Creevy and Malfoy, or is it just me?
Darian
Author's Response: Well, Gilbert is enthusiastic like Colin was but he's only superficially like Colin and Gerald is not like Malfoy all shall be revealed in due time :D
Reviewer: cnor9602 Signed
Date: 2008.03.09 - 10:45AM
Title: Return
I am enjoying this story very much. I look forward to more chapters
Author's Response: Thank you. More chapters should be along very soon :D
Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed
Date: 2008.03.06 - 06:13AM
Title: Return
ginny hasn't got over her demons then, and we still don't know who the teachers are!!! when is your next chapter going to be on here so i can look out for it! x
Author's Response: Hopefully within a week :D
Reviewer: LadyChi Signed
Date: 2008.02.29 - 06:24AM
Title: Return
*waves* Hello Kezza! I think you know why I'm here. I know why I'm here. I'm here because this is an awesome story and I enjoyed every moment I read of it. I'm ready for Chapter 27. When's that coming out again? (Bah, I say to the spell check on this thing... "when" can totally be contracted with "is".)
Things I love:
~ Dialogue. It's very easy and free flowing... very little is stilted and unnatural.
~ Balance. Your prose is easy to read and it flows well.
~ Harry and Ginny Nearly Smutty scenes. Le sigh. So wonderful. Especially the scene a couple of chapters back when Ginny is getting dressed... Yummy.
~ All the bits when they were in Australia. Though I could have wished for more of the Grangers.
Things You could ponder:
~ When you begin your next novel-length... consider less "heavy handed" moral themes. Obviously, you're big on no sex before marriage. But it was a theme in every chapter, or every other chapter. I found myself going, "I got this," and skipping some passages.
~ What makes a romantic relationship powerful? When someone is in love... When it just *IS*. You can show the love between Ron and Hermione and Harry and Ginny without hitting us over the head with an obvious stick. Tone it down and let the reader infer the depth of the emotions behind the writing.
Things I Want:
~ A fast update! Seriously, Kezza! Hurry it up! :P
Author's Response: I must do the moral theme thing subconciously as I didn't realise that was in there. *ponders*
Also ponders obvious stick ... searches ... ah ... I *may* have found it :) we'll see! ROFLOL
Seriously there will be more to concentrate on than le Romance now - I mean who is the man with the cat hat?????? Has no one pondered this question???? :D Chapter 27 coming, erm, soon(ish)
Reviewer: xxhgxx Signed
Date: 2008.02.28 - 09:10PM
Title: Return
I can't believe that you would leave us with such an intense cliffhanger and then not update for over a week! I guess I won't kill you...but only because if I killed you, you wouldn't be able to write anymore! But seriously, I love this times a million. Please don't stop writing! This is the best, one of my favorite fanfics of all time. And trust me when I say I've read a lot.
Author's Response: I have had a busy couple of weeks! Chapter 27 is slowly coming together but Ron has been dragging his feet and very recalcitrant ... Neville's on the case ...
Reviewer: Yolis7 Signed
Date: 2008.02.25 - 04:58PM
Title: Return
Great...love it..it was sad..and really good too..love it..
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: GryffindorGal87 Signed
Date: 2008.02.23 - 06:21PM
Title: Return
another great chapter! Kudos to Harry for sticking it to Draco. =] I hope Ginny is alright. I can't wait for the next chapter! =]
Author's Response: Yay Harry! Do you think I would hurt everyone's fave redhead??? :D
Reviewer: swimsocceg Signed
Date: 2008.02.23 - 12:34PM
Title: Return
good chap. as always please update soon
Author's Response: I'll try to update soon :D
Reviewer: Phoeness Signed
Date: 2008.02.23 - 04:45AM
Title: Return
Hi !
Another great chapter, yes !!
Well done with the integration of the character of Astoria and the preview of Hannah’s futur job !
The history between Luna and Neville in the train is very funny and the scene with Bartholomew is hilarious ! lol
But I feel very sad for Ginny. It’s only normal for her to react like that after all she saw... I hope (well, in fact I’m sure) Harry and Hagrid will find the words to confort her. I must say that for a moment I was afraid she left Hogwarts...
And poor Harry, he has to face the curiosity of the youngest pupils and Ginny’s need to be conforted. It isn’t easy for him.
I wonder if Draco really has any remorses about the battle or what he lived last year and isn’t grateful to Harry for saving his life, or if he has remorses but doesn’t want to show them... What an idiot !!
I’m looking forwards the next chapters !!!
Phoeness
Author's Response: Yes, yes, Draco is an idiot ... lol Mind you I don't think it is easy for any of them - Draco inclided perhaps?
I am looking forward to the next chapters too! I should write them ... ;)
Reviewer: Laurendcg05 Signed
Date: 2008.02.23 - 04:27AM
Title: Return
That was an interesting chapter, kind of odd at the end though. I'm a little worried about Ginny, I mean, so many things could be going on in her head. I'm most likely to suspect it's about Fred, but I could be wrong. She just needs to stop running away and let Harry comfort her, but of course, it's the right thing that's hardest. Anyway, great chapter, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Seems we allllll want to know what's going on with Ginny ... ;)
Reviewer: hushpuppy22 Signed
Date: 2008.02.23 - 01:56AM
Title: Return
No Review
Reviewer: Wolfric Signed
Date: 2008.02.23 - 01:03AM
Title: Return
I have enjoyed your story a great deal. Thanks for writing. W
Author's Response: I'm glad, and you're welcome :D
Reviewer: melipy Signed
Date: 2008.02.23 - 01:03AM
Title: Return
oh man! I can't wait to read the next part! That was great! Hopefully the next chapter will be out faster *wink wink*
Author's Response: Yes, the next chapter should be out faster. :D Now if I could just wrestle them into behaving for me ...
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