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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.01.08 - 09:50PM Title: George's Grief

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Powerful scene between Harry and George. They are both grieving so much and that pain has to go somewhere.



Reviewer: Blissful Oblivion Signed Date: 2012.04.20 - 12:21AM Title: George's Grief

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That was an awesome and highly intense chapter! I'm still teary. The argument between Harry and George made me feel sorry for both of them. I don't think Harry and George would've fought like this but the depiction of their grief was spot on. I hope they make up after like as I always loved Harry's friendship with the twins. Why did Fred have to die? I still haven't forgiven JK for doing it but I should probably stop before i start ranting about that. The moment in the end with Mrs. Weasley was so bueaitful and sad. Really well done.



Reviewer: chelsealeann Signed Date: 2010.07.18 - 11:39PM Title: George's Grief

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wow. that was intense. i am still teary. they both had their points in the argument, but none of that needed to be said. i sure hope they can come together and be friends because i love the relationship harry had with the twins. great chapter!!



Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2010.01.26 - 12:00PM Title: George's Grief

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George and Harry have quite a way to go to be able to understand each other and love each other again, don't they?



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.01.19 - 05:58PM Title: George's Grief

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I thought this chapter couldn't get any more powerful until I read the closing words. George and Harry were both wrong to lash out.

I have a friend who lost her baby to still-birth and another friend who lost her eighteen year old son. I know I've had the conversation with one who thinks it is worse to lose a child when you have all the memories and not one you never knew. I never told the other friend what she said (obviously!) because she was sick of dealing with people who felt that way. Harry and George are like those two friends. And hopefully they will, in time, see that each brings its own pain and neither is worse or easier. George will hopefully realise that Teddy's pain over the years to come maybe different from his pain, but is none-the-less the pain of grief and hopefully be able to help him by showing understanding, compassion and being able to share with him.

Harry's pain is about the absence of the love of parents and in particular the loss of the love of a mother...that is why those closing words are so moving, wonderful and powerful.



Reviewer: Rowlingisgreat Signed Date: 2009.06.27 - 11:41PM Title: George's Grief

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I am not sure I see Harry being this weepy. It's really out of character for him.

Author's Response: A number of people said the same thing. I made a few decisions about how I thought he'd be at the end of it all. I'm happy with how it all turned out in the end.



Reviewer: kash2110 Signed Date: 2008.10.17 - 07:04PM Title: George's Grief

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You've really got to stop this angst, I 'm having real touble in reading this wonderful story with so many tears eminating from my eyes!!!

I have to say your 'arguement' between Harry & George was without a doubt some of the FINEST writing I have EVER read on a fanfic anywhere, Well done on yet another fabulous chapter!!!

Author's Response: I really glad you enjoyed that scene at the time it cased a few people to look at me sideways but I always liked it!



Reviewer: wotcherberta Signed Date: 2008.09.17 - 04:57PM Title: George's Grief

oh my god how sad. I CAN'T BELIEVE GEORGE SAID THAT TO HIM!
he already feels bad enough as it is, taking the blame for every death in the war. *sniff*
i hope the become nice to one another again and as ron would say, "sort out their priorities".
keep up the good work.

:Dwotcherberta

Author's Response: Bad George! Awww don't worry I'm sure it'll all be fine!



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.09.10 - 11:38AM Title: George's Grief

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Reviewer: gryff_princess Signed Date: 2008.08.14 - 03:13AM Title: George's Grief

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Reviewer: Artistand Signed Date: 2008.08.04 - 08:40PM Title: George's Grief

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Reviewer: santafe Signed Date: 2008.04.03 - 03:33PM Title: George's Grief

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Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.03.03 - 08:07AM Title: George's Grief

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another good chapter!

Author's Response: Review 600! yay you! :D



Reviewer: Athena07 Signed Date: 2008.02.02 - 02:10PM Title: George's Grief

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This was extremely depressing. I can actually picture Ginny yelling at George for saying that to Harry.

Author's Response: Yeah ... but it gets less depressing!



Reviewer: Trooper_chaos Signed Date: 2007.11.23 - 02:18PM Title: George's Grief

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WOW! Just found this story and love it so far, and WOW!!! the argument between harry and george was absolutely fantastic. Keep writing

jp

Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Hope you like the rest as well. Let me know!



Reviewer: somethingwicked Signed Date: 2007.09.05 - 12:26PM Title: George's Grief

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Wow...intense chapter. I loved it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for eviewing!



Reviewer: ilovetheweasleys_7 Signed Date: 2007.09.02 - 01:33AM Title: George's Grief

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Reviewer: PSPotter Anonymous Date: 2007.08.31 - 08:25PM Title: George's Grief

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That was rough



Reviewer: faded memories Signed Date: 2007.08.24 - 04:53PM Title: George's Grief

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So sweet

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2007.08.18 - 11:57PM Title: George's Grief

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WOW! Very powerful scene here. And I can SOOOO see this happening...both of them battling with their own grief, not knowing how to handle it...not realizing that they could actually HELP each other...after all, no
one else would be able to understand their pain so completely. yet, both needing to blow of steam...Very good insight into their hearts and minds! Please keep up the excellent work!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad others can see this happening too - it's ben a bit controversial I'll admit but I could see it happening. they didn't mean it to, they wouldn't normally come to blows like that but in the aftermath...absolutley. it shows us into their very souls as well and I thought we needed that glimpse.




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