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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.07.19 - 07:10PM Title: The Right Time
that was funny love the asking for a blessing that was the funniest thing ever but alas you finally gave everyone what they wanted a first kiss and several others and them coming together well done assuming last chap is back at the Burrow that should be interesting cant wait.....
Reviewer: Russtopher Signed Date: 2007.08.13 - 06:26PM Title: The Right Time
"You Have Finite Incantatem’ed My Heart (So Watcha Gonna Do ‘Bout It?)" - this one song title was worth the entire read!!!!
Seriously, this was a great story, nice paced writing, *very* well done!
Author's Response: LOL. I'm glad you liked it. I had the hardest time thinking up these things, so it's great to know that someone appreciates them.
Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.08.12 - 02:28PM Title: The Right Time
Oh, and i thought this chapter was going to start out with fogged windows and lots of humidity! You quickly changed the tone form hormones to vaudeville as Harry tried to skip his way from lily pod to lily pod and give adequate explanation for his turn of phrase. Ginny thank God, was willing to wait for a proper explanation, but my gosh, the temperature coolled really quick.
Dispatching Romilda with the bat-bogey seemed to be Ginny's final justice, but what a surprise who the caster was!
The final declaration couldn't have been better paced, and I always love the moment when harry smells the freesia, in this case with the real flowers on the balcony. What a kiss!
Having Raphael and Vittoria stumble into Harry and Ginny was the ultimate "good feeling" scene and visualising Harry with his hand on Vittoris's stomach was so foreshadowing. Anf Hermione will get her wich.
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Oh no! Fogge-up windows would definitely earn me a reprimand! 'Sides, I hoped that what had happened would somehow ring more true than them jumping into bed at once. You have to admit, Harry's words were a bit unexpected!
I'm glad you liked the kiss - it almost ventured into 'R' territory, but thank goodness Harry was a gentleman, eh?
Reviewer: firestar Signed Date: 2007.08.09 - 08:55AM Title: The Right Time
Fantastic story, cwarbeck, Absolutely Fabulous!
Cleverly written and so very funny!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it so far.
Reviewer: LuvinHG Signed Date: 2007.08.09 - 07:54AM Title: The Right Time
Haha! The 11th??? I would've been dead by then. hehe. I'm sorry to rush you really. I just really like this story and was afraid you might abandon it because of what Canon is now. Please don't though. It's really a great story, and you are a great writer. There are quite a few authors that's feeling really bad because their stories don't match JK's ending to DH. But that really shouldn't matter. It takes a lot of dedication and talent to write fan fiction. Canon is kewl and all, but really, the fan fiction writer is for the fans who wants to see Canon stretched above and beyond, and you're one of those writers. So don't give up. There's too many fans out here who you've pulled into your kewl world of Harry Potter.
Keep up the good work, and hopefully by the time I get home from work there'll be an update for "The Right Time". cya.
KD
Author's Response: This story is completed, KD. I don't post if they aren't because it would be unfair to readers to suddenly abandon stories in the middle of everything.
I will have an update for you by the time you get home; however, you may still be a bit ticked off - as it will be the last chapter! :)
Reviewer: LuvinHG Signed Date: 2007.08.09 - 06:07AM Title: The Right Time
Okay, I'm absolutely dying here. Tapping my fingers while waiting on an update. I'm really starting to take back how kewl I think you really are for making us wait so long in between chapters. *sniff sniff*
No really, I think your updates should come at least every three or four days. The suspense of what will happen next is killing me. :p
KD
Author's Response: Oh no, wait! We cannot antagonize the kewlest of the kewl - KD! LOL. You're in luck, I was planning to update on the 11th, but just for you, I'll be posting the chapter today. That's because you are teh kewlest.
Reviewer: Giwea Signed Date: 2007.08.07 - 10:06AM Title: The Right Time
Wow, abolutely great. I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Athea Signed Date: 2007.08.03 - 10:00PM Title: The Right Time
How sweet! Only our Ginny (well, and maybe Fred and George--yes in my fanfic world Fred will live on despite what happened in DH) could refer to Voldemort as a "Brainless bloody wanker" And Harry's blessing was so perfect. What else could you wish for a baby? Another romantic chapter. Ahhh.
Author's Response: Hi Erika. You should have seen the first things that Ginny called old Moldyshorts. I would have got an R rating for them.
I'm with you, Fred will live forever in my HP world. And that's why all my next stories will be firmly AU, as I could never write without him.
Reviewer: faded memories Signed Date: 2007.08.03 - 04:02PM Title: The Right Time
Whos's about to get married???????
Author's Response: Um...Hermione? Unless I made a mistake and that wasn't made clear in the preceding chapter entitled "Girl Talk." :)
Reviewer: Katastrophe Signed Date: 2007.08.03 - 08:21AM Title: The Right Time
Leave it to Ginny to get Hermione an appt even after she was invited by the jilted bride, stayed for the real wedding and the reception. Go figure!
Yay! They are finally together. Although, I did think Harry was going to blow it with those seriously misplaced words. He came through in the end though.
Cel, never apologize for long chapters. Usually you hear reviewers asking for longer chapters, so long does not equal bad!
Until next time ~Michelle~
Author's Response: Hi Michelle. Ah, but Ginny's a crafty one, eh? She's really at the right place at the right time. Thanks for the kind words. It's just that I have a problem with longer chapters, having quite a short attention span myself, so naturally, I assumed that it was true for everyone else. Guess I was wrong! :)
Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2007.08.02 - 06:31PM Title: The Right Time
i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hurry with the next chapter plese
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: ariya Signed Date: 2007.08.01 - 10:25PM Title: The Right Time
I love it! I gobbled up this story today, I love the words you use, and the way you portrayed the characters. Fabulous! :]]
Author's Response: Hey! A new reader! Thanks for taking time to check out this little story of mine.
Reviewer: LuvinHG Signed Date: 2007.08.01 - 09:20PM Title: The Right Time
You can be kewl depending on how fast you can get the next chapter out. ;) hehe. No, no. You are super kewl. Anyone who has me watching for an update daily is kewl in my book. Thanks for the great reply to my review.
KD
Author's Response: No, KD, you are teh super kewlest. :)
Next chapter will be out soon, I promise - just for you!
Reviewer: thisgrlrox Signed Date: 2007.08.01 - 12:10PM Title: The Right Time
I have a feeling Hermione is going to be very happy and get her wedding dress. It may also help Raphael to break into the market in London. A deal of mutual benefit.
I loved the way that Harry kept bungling what he wanted to express. He's still the awkward teen underneath isn't he? You showed that very nicely in this chapter while also showing his growth in finally having him reveal his feelings to Ginny. I also loved when Harry blessed Raphael and Vittoria's child. Always the reluctant hero/celebrity that one. It wouldn't be Harry if he knew how to handle that situation though. It was nicely written.
It was nice how Sylvia and Romilda got their comeuppance. It was about time. I like that it was done with a Bat Bogey also. Even if it wasn't Ginny who cast it. Her response to Colin, Parvati, and Harry was priceless.
Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks. I thought that Harry's reaction was very typical of him. It's not like he turned into Mr Smooth overnight, although it did seem like it in the last chapter, didn't it? That was purely accidental on his part - guess he got caught up in the moment!
Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2007.08.01 - 09:30AM Title: The Right Time
I was wondering how you were going to get Hermione's wish taken care of. Well done! I believe this is your best story yet. I was a little disappointed in Ginny, even thinking that Harry would want her to go to bed with him (inappropriatly, that is). But I suppose she was thinking back to what Molly had said, so I'll give her a moment of vulnerability in which to doubt our hero's nobel intentions.
Is the story done? Because if it is I expect you to immediably get busy on the 19 years. Tehe.
Author's Response: Oh, I think the problem is the use of the word 'lover'. Coming from someone who you've loved forever and you're not too certain if he returns the sentiment, it can be quite understandable that Ginny was a little shocked to hear that word from Harry, and for her to doubt just a little bit about his intentions. But if she really did think he was only after her body, I don't think she would have been willing to hear him out - she would have just slapped him right there and walked off!
Reviewer: DarkLady Anonymous Date: 2007.08.01 - 03:13AM Title: The Right Time
Omg is that it?? Or is there more?? Please tell me there's more...
OMG I love it.
LOVE IT LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!
*fangirl dance*
Harry and Ginny are just too cute, they make me if it's possible even more happier.
Any other day I would have thought this chapter was really fluffy and romantic but since I've reached the one year mark with my boyfriend, I'm all for romance..
Anyway You did a great and wonderful job on this chapter.
The bit where Harry was imagining his unborn child was so touching...
Hope there's more... I wanna know what the family's reaction is..
Hope to hear from you soon..
Shaheen
Author's Response: Hi Shaheen. Happy Anniversary! Wow! One whole year! There'll definitely be one more chapter. I hope you'll like it too.
Reviewer: DQBunny Signed Date: 2007.08.01 - 02:39AM Title: The Right Time
You know, I've been terribly remiss in reviewing your stories, especially this one. You're an author I constantly turn to for inspiration, especially when writing fluff. This chapter was wonderful and I was laughing so hard at how Harry kept digging himself into a hole. I think the poor boy nearly wound up in China before making his way back out! I love the little touches and the truth behind Raphael's marriage in the first place. You really created a great character in the form of Romilda's sister and I love how Romilda herself is scared of Ginny. Poor Pope Harry, having to bestow blessings. ;) I'm very glad to see things turning out well for all of them...well, except the Vanes.
Author's Response: Hi megs! *waves madly* I'm flattered that you like my fluff, considering that you're a great author yourself. What can I say? Harry and his 'blurtish' is always good for a laugh, but in the end, you'll find yourself rooting for him!
