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Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2016.06.18 - 08:38PM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

Colin's thinking about food hahahahahahaha



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.10.08 - 08:04AM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

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great chapter



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.06.08 - 05:03AM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

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What an excitrment! I get the feeling that the mother of the groom and the minister were expecting trouble!!



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.07.19 - 06:42PM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

Well done looks like the question for this story isn't when they get together but rather when and how many times you can stop there first kiss... But you sure added a bunch of drama to the pot with the wedding though I am with Colin reception or no?



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.08.12 - 01:34AM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

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This chapter really brings home your ability to enrich the narrative with details. you did this through using the entire cast of players to inject humor and personality attributes. Molly, Tonks, hermione in particular. by introducing first Colin, showing him to have grown in maturity, and then surprising everyone with him dating parvati was just great to read.

Harry and Ginny were just so romantic together and the imagery of them together and Ginny's robes slowly being revealed to harry's excitded reaction was also delightful to read.

I am curious that harry held in his jealousy when Paolo intervened and flirted audaciously with Ginny, yet when Cordelia arrived, Ginny just gave her the one-two knockout without Cordelis realizing what had happened to her. Why was it necessary for Ginny to be so on the attack with Cordelia when Cordelia's initail comments weren't really that threatening?

Loved the Vittoria grand entrance and poor Sylvis's final faint when she saw Ginny with Harry. Probably your best chapter so far.

Author's Response: But Harry did show his jealousy - he scowled and glared daggers at him, Paolo just didn't react! LOL. And the reason that he didn't say anything when Paolo was there is because he's Harry! I don't think he actually knew what he would say and was a bit flustered at Ginny's amused reaction to Paolo. He did manage to convey his feelings to Ginny, didn't he?

As to Ginny - well, Cordelia's body language was enough to tell Ginny that this woman was out to get Harry - she touched him on the arm, she kept calling Harry 'darling', and she eyed Ginny condescendingly after they were introduced. I guess Cordelia just rubbed Ginny the wrong way from the get go! :)



Reviewer: s2s Signed Date: 2007.07.25 - 01:59PM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

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Can't wait to read more! Perhaps your Paulo was inspired by Paulo Nutini's song "New Shoes" :). Great chapter - how much longer will they get to enjoy Italy? (I'm sure JKR was channeling you for a couple of pages in DH!)

Author's Response: Um, no. LOL. Paolo was inspired by a character in a certain film that I will not mention, as it will reveal just how immature my tastes are in movies! LOL.

I almost wish that JKR had channelled me, or any of the other fluff writers around. Maybe we'd have fulfilled our admittedly high expectations of quality H/G time in DH!

If you're patient enough, the next chapter should be up in an hour or two. :)



Reviewer: hippoiluvdearly1 Signed Date: 2007.07.25 - 05:35AM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

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hahah! ooh! sorry for not reviewing lately, but wow! i Love thiss! its soo good! Please update sooon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I do love your pen name. LOL.



Reviewer: herekittykitty Signed Date: 2007.07.25 - 01:44AM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

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gosh, I've been away for awhile, haven't i?? Anyhow, I was SO OVERJOYED to see that you'd posted this - it's adorable, really. I'm going to list just a few of the things i love, not just from this chapter, but the whole thing: 1)The interaction between Molly and Ginny is so cute! Molly's tongue-in-cheek jokes about exactly what happens behind closed doors... haha! 2) Oh, Tonks! Tonks at the dinner table is hysterical - she's one of my favorite characters, as i'm sure you're noticed, and you do a bang-up job with her. 3) Ginny's very sweet sisterly relationship with Hermione, and Hermione's very sweet sisterly relationship with Harry. You do well with the little things that make Hermione so... Hermione, the collectible books, the SPEW badges....great details. I have so much trouble writing her without making her sound like a nerd - i totally admire that. I really could go on, but I'll quit now, until you post the next chapter, which I can't wait to read!

Author's Response: Hey EQB! Where the heck did you disappear to? LOL. Thanks for reading this - I did show you the first chapter, right?

I'm happy you liked the way I wrote the characters. Molly, Tonks, Hermione, H/G... although to tell you honestly, DH has sort of thrown me (and a lot of fanfic writers, I bet) for a loop. Anyway, great to hear you again, and hey, you still have to post the last chapter of AWAT!



Reviewer: DeborahSu Signed Date: 2007.07.24 - 08:23PM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

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Aaaawwww!!!! I thought it was finished when I started it, but it's not! Please, please update soon? I'm loving the relationships & interactions!


Author's Response: Hi! Well, I'll put up the next chapter soon, I promise. Like maybe... later?



Reviewer: TheHiddenSeer Signed Date: 2007.07.24 - 03:50AM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

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I am... Just... Woah. Having found this site today, i am already dedicated. I wait patiently and desperately for your next installment.

Author's Response: Hello, Jason, and welcome to SIYE! I hope that you'll have a blast reading all the great stories that can be found here. Thanks for the review, and don't worry, the next chapter will be up pretty soon.



Reviewer: GypsyWeasley Signed Date: 2007.07.23 - 08:29PM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

I'm reviewing again to let you know how much I'm looking forward to you finishing this story...I don't think you're that far off of canon, and this is an excellent fluffy piece that I think we all need right now after the emotional maelstrom that was DH. :)

Author's Response: Hello. I'll be putting up the next chapter sometime this week, after the post DH euphoria has passed. :)



Reviewer: swimsocceg Signed Date: 2007.07.22 - 10:10PM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

I loved this story and i do love dh as my new favorite book :) but i dont want to see u not continue this story just cuz jk rowlings is over so i hope u continue this story now even after dh

Author's Response: Thanks again!



Reviewer: swimsocceg Signed Date: 2007.07.22 - 10:10PM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

I loved this story and i do love dh as my new favorite book :) but i dont want to see u not continue this story just cuz jk rowlings is over so i hope u continue this story now even after dh

Author's Response: Oh, don't worry, this story is completed. I'll put up the next chapter in a day or so.



Reviewer: Torak Signed Date: 2007.07.19 - 06:44PM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

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What's this? I've read through it thus far in one sitting, and there's no more? Never mind Deathly Hallows, ignore it. Keep going on this! It's funnier, fluffier, and all-round more worth reading than DH (at least if the allegedly genuine version I've read is anything to go by), so never mind that, step away from that queue, and get back to the keyboard. I want to see how this en... no, actually, I want to see how this continues. Never mind it ending, you can skip that entirely. Let there be fluff!

(Oh, and having the Turtles as a fashion designer... genius.)

It's a fun version of Molly, too, much more in tune with how I imagine her. After all, she's had a fair few sproglings, she's hardly going to be a stranger to the nocturnal pursuits.

Anyway, that'll do for the review. I don't want to keep you from your writing for too long.

Author's Response: Wow, Andrew, I'm honoured that you read this little story, and that you told me to ignore DH in favour of continuing it. (As if I would actually do that, but still...)

Glad you liked Molly. I thought maybe that I had made her a bit too liberated (if some of the reviews were anything to go by), but I agree with you, she's probably more in-the-know about these things than she lets on. Thanks again! Your review means a lot to me.



Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2007.07.19 - 04:12PM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

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I was going to wait until just before Dh comes out to reread this chapter & review but i couldn`t resist doing so a bit early.

What a wonderfull chapter starting with that lovly burrow scean having a nice normall Weasley breakfast untill ron puts his foot in it with his laguage which Amelie propley coppied & throws an egg in for good mesure & i can just imagin harry sitting back & enjoying the whol thing as it is so diffrent to how he gre up.

Loved harry refering to ginny as a golden snitch although iam not sure how ginny would take it although harry dose seam to get away with a lot so iam wondering what ginny would refer to harry as.

The wedding was fantasti & you got the italian mother down perfectly as they defenatly run the houselhold & its a much more merternal dominated sociaty than than the uk.

Ginny gental sparrying with cordial had me in stiches as the poor girl didnt relly now what hit her & just increased harrys attraction to the stunning redhead by his side & then his musing on his own wedding as i cant quite see them being the type to enlope (of course they would then have a more formal wedding back at the burrow as harry would never do anything to make molly displeased with him).

Defenatly looking forward to the next chapter even if it will be post DH which am getting at midnight from the local book store (iam relly to old to go to these book launches but its the last one so to hell with it iam just going to enjoy it) personally iam hopping one of the Vane`s will make a move on harry tan we relly will see a womens fury although the chance og f harry actually falling for any one but ginny are zero.

James

Author's Response: Hi James. You want one of the Vanes to make a move on Harry? Hmmm... who am I to deny a loyal reviewer? LOL.

Thanks for noticing and appreciating all the different scenes. I know the one that stood out the most was Sylvia fainting dead away, but like I told Dave, I found the put down of Ms Silverton to be much more amusing. See you on the other side of DH!



Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2007.07.19 - 02:35PM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

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Lovelly tit for tat. First Harry is jealous of Paolo, then Ginny's jealous of Cordelia. Course it only lasts seconds in Ginnys case,as she quickly realizes that Cordelia is an annoying git and no competition. I'm sure I'm thick, but I didn't get it about the shoes?

Author's Response: LOL. You and Harry both! The shoes are a girl thing, you know? So if Paolo actually noticed Ginny's shoes, well, then... :)



Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2007.07.18 - 03:01PM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

really wat chaoter chapter 13

Author's Response: Can't promise anything... but they'll get there soon enough. Can't force these things because it makes for a rushed and poorly thought out storyline, which I cannot stand. Meanwhile, I hope you enjoy DH. Maybe it'll tide your extreme impatience over. Thank you.



Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2007.07.17 - 09:01PM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

i dont care anymorei just wanna now when they kiss already


Author's Response: Alright, alright! They'll kiss after DH comes out! :)



Reviewer: kingbobrules Signed Date: 2007.07.17 - 04:50PM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

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This was ridiculously funny and highly amusing! The plot line of this chapter was just perfect... What's the betting that it'll B Ginny and Harry's wedding next?

Author's Response: Oh, well... um... don't you think they'll be moving a wee bit too fast if they suddenly get married? But then again, this is Italy, and they're far away from everybody else...



Reviewer: swimsocceg Signed Date: 2007.07.17 - 12:18AM Title: Something as Normal as a Wedding

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I just got bback form vacation to read 3 chapters and i must say they are brillant

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you had a great time in your vacation!




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