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Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2016.06.18 - 05:17PM Title: A Spot of Tea

So funny about Mary lol



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.10.08 - 07:47AM Title: A Spot of Tea

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ha ha, that was SO funny
loved the talk about Ginny's "bedside manner" :)



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.06.07 - 06:31PM Title: A Spot of Tea

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It's good (and exciting!) to seem them so at ease (well not totally, but I hope you know what I mean) with each other.



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.07.19 - 04:13PM Title: A Spot of Tea

Well doesn't seem like you have to much to write now since you really have harry being quite forward and Ginny also fallen for him so don't really know how you can stretch it 5 more chaps but I am more than willing to read them.



Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2008.05.18 - 08:08PM Title: A Spot of Tea

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You are great with OBHWF moments. (I know, one would probably call this is an H/G fic, with OBHWF and R/H moments.) "Unca Fed! Unca Jo!" So cute and fun.

I really liked the line “Right little stalker, that one” and all of the stuff about Ginny showing Harry her nurse-maid abilities.

I also love how goo-goo eye'd H and G are for each other. Mrs. Weasley discussing her sons' sex lives, and Ron's typically hilarious reaction were all classic.

Another great thing: the way you wrote Remus and Tonks together, and the way that they and Harry are such an accepted part of the Weasley family. So wonderful and fun. It makes you want to be a Weasley, too. :-)



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.08.12 - 12:12AM Title: A Spot of Tea

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I loved all the humor in this chapter.

Ron mistaking that his proposed proposal had been leaked, which it had been.

George getting something from Mary.

Tonks and Remus' wisecracks and kibbutzing!

But it was Ginny who took the cake when she said she was going to show Harry more of her bedside manner. If I was Harry, I would have lifted her over my shoulder right then and there, and headed for the nearest private cave there was!


Author's Response: The nearest private cave would have been really handy indeed! Glad you liked all the on-going conversations.



Reviewer: The Seeker Signed Date: 2007.07.15 - 10:07PM Title: A Spot of Tea

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Hi Cel,

Consider my luck: I return from vacation, which is usually a depressing event, but my spirits soar when I find that I have three chapters waiting from you and a one-shot from St. M. Giddy anticipation quickly replaced my vacation funk! (sorry for the pun) What I wrote to St. M applies equally to you. Everything you write is exactly as it should be. The plot lines flow seamlessly, the flirting between our favorite couple almost turns the computer screen a bright red, the humor effortlessly arises from the events and the characters.

This chapter was continuously funny; the children were adorable; the skwert was inspired; Molly's openness about her offsprings' sex lifes was hilarious; Tonks was so . . . Tonks; Remus having a family was heartwarming; and Harry and Ginny's flirting warmed the rest of me. Who would have thought that holding hands could be so incendiary and foretelling of events hopefully to come?

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! And I hope you realize your readers will follow you anywhere, DH or not. Best, Jim

Author's Response: Hi Jim. I was wondering where you had gone off to, seeing that I had not got any of your usual wonderful reviews! :)

I'm happy that you liked this peek into a day in the life of the Weasleys. I think that things get just a bit more exciting whenever Harry and Ginny are there. I would have loved to have been a fly on the wall during that tea party.



Reviewer: LuvinHG Signed Date: 2007.07.10 - 08:28PM Title: A Spot of Tea

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What another kewl chapter you've written here. My favorite part was the "George's Situation" scene. Mrs. Weasley doesn't bite her tongue when it comes to her children and that part was just too funny. George, for some reason is one of my favorite HP characters and it was great to see him get some writing time in this story. He would be the twin I would crush on. :) So thanks for giving him some "air time".
I love Harry and Ginny's flirty sides. They are getting quite brilliant with it. I smile from cheek to cheek when I'm reading them. The looks they give each other and the comments they make are just so awesome. You write them well.

Keep up the good work and steady updates. You are doing a fantabulous job!

Dee

Author's Response: Hello, Dee-who-is-kewl. I like George too! For some reason, Fred seems to be the twin who gets more attention - I wonder why that is, eh?

I think that Molly would be that type of mother - the fussy, loveable type who isn't afraid to praise (or scold) her children in public.

Thanks for the lovely review.



Reviewer: Hajra Signed Date: 2007.07.10 - 07:22AM Title: A Spot of Tea

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This was wonderful! I have a huge grin on my face. I'm delighed you brought in the Twins to help spice things up...they never fail to make me laugh!

Author's Response: I'm very glad to have put a huge grin on your face. I love the twins, but sometimes I think they like to be heard too much. :)



Reviewer: Va Guy Signed Date: 2007.07.09 - 01:04PM Title: A Spot of Tea

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There were so many laughs in this chapter. Tonks tripping over Moody's leg, George's....ehem.... problems. Michel making the sucker for Fleur....It's too funny.

My inner Ewok was growling "Yes Harry, you should have kissed her!". Enjoyed that moment.

Still loving the story Cel. Don't worry if you don't get it all posted before DH comes out. I'll keep reading as long as you keep writing.

Author's Response: Hi Mike. I can just picture Tonks tripping over Moody's leg during the reception or during the bouquet toss! LOL.

I'm sure that Harry's been berating himself ever since Michel spilled that pumpkin juice on him. Oh well, there's still some more chapters where he'll probably get another chance to kiss Ginny!



Reviewer: UnorthodoxConvention Signed Date: 2007.07.09 - 10:37AM Title: A Spot of Tea

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yay! :) thanks for the prompt update! :)

Author's Response: You're welcome!



Reviewer: thisgrlrox Signed Date: 2007.07.09 - 10:08AM Title: A Spot of Tea

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I think Harry's kick in the head gave him some gumption. I'm glad for it because I'm thoroughly enjoying reading it. Hopefully Harry's healer will allow him to travel to the wedding. Wouldn't that be a kick in the pants if he was told he couldn't attend. I'm sure Harry would find a way, whatever it took.

Loved Mrs. Weasley again in this chapter. She's got such a straightforward honesty that brightens up the chapter. Lovely!

Author's Response: He should really be thanking McLaggen then! LOL. I'm happy you like this Molly of mine. I hope that you find her in character!



Reviewer: Lapin_Joyeux Signed Date: 2007.07.09 - 08:15AM Title: A Spot of Tea

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Wow! I really loved this chapter! It's not really surprising, your stories are always really fun to read, i love them all! I loved the part with the skrewt, wouldn't have thought about it lol

I found a little mistake : Fleur will be thrilled to see that her son is une artiste.”
Actually, it's "un artiste" because Michel is a guy, une is for feminine nouns. (My fisrt language is french so you can trust what I say lol)

looking forward to your next chapter,
Lapin-Joyeux

Author's Response: Oops. Pardon my French. LOL. I'll make that correction now. I suppose next time i try writing in French, I'll send you an e-mail! Do you also happen to speak Italian?



Reviewer: Athea Signed Date: 2007.07.08 - 10:48PM Title: A Spot of Tea

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Ah, Cel, our poor Ginny is going about this all wrong. She needs to understand that you can only use your nieces and nephews to play cruel tricks on their parents when your own children are older than said nieces and nephews. Payback is going to be torture! ^-^ We have a friend that gave our kids the loudest toys imaginable (loud, but educational) for their birthdays and for Christmas. My husband and I have a list of toys we're just waiting to give to his first child. (insert maniacal laughter here.)

Your "in-the-know" Mrs. Weasley was great. Fred and George were as amusing as ever. And the moment between Ginny and Harry was electric. I hope you have a particularly funny chapter all ready for the 23rd or so, just in case we need it! --Erika

Author's Response: LOL. Erika, I wouldn't know, since my daughter's cousins live so far away from us that we hardly see each other!

Electric moments are my specialty, don't you know? :)



Reviewer: werekitten Signed Date: 2007.07.08 - 10:37PM Title: A Spot of Tea

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Great chapters! I totally loved them. Especially the word susurrus -- have you read The Wee Free Men by Terry Pratchet?
So... things are finally coming together with Ginny and Harry! Yay! I can't wait until the wedding, or if something romantic happens before hand... update soon!

Author's Response: Yay! The Nac Mac Feegle live! I've always wondered if JKR's garden gnomes are related to the Wee Free Men - it would account for the fact that nobody seems to be able to get rid of them. And that susurrus - does that mean that the Hive is nearby? :)



Reviewer: s2s Signed Date: 2007.07.08 - 10:27PM Title: A Spot of Tea

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“'Well, that was amusing,'” said George (and me!). He looked around the kitchen as if searching for some other source of entertainment." I'm glad to have this entertaining story to look forward to when Bk 7 calls for tissues . . . fabulous job. Not only is it LOL funny - but so heart warming in a feel-good-all-over sort of way.

Author's Response: I hope we won't need any tissues at all after reading DH! Just say no to killing dear Harry (or Ginny), JKR!

I'm glad you liked it for the fluff and the entertainment value. Made my day!



Reviewer: AwesomeGryffindor Signed Date: 2007.07.08 - 09:28PM Title: A Spot of Tea

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I knew Ginny got some of her personality and sassy-ness from Molly Weasley! Like mother, like daughter - I love how you illustrated it with the eye-roll and "...And besides, may I remind you, Ron, that I have seen enough of yours and your bothers’ bits to write a book about them!" Hilarious! And poor Ron, how he gets himself into these situations. And Fred and George didn't even bat an eye when they walked in and discovered their Mum was talking about them (and their bits). LOL.

I like the gradual, building up of Harry and Ginny, especially with the flirting and talk of bedside manner (even if it was to pull one over on the twins). Harry finally worked up the nerve to ask her out! I hope his head injury doesn't prevent him from taking Ginny to the wedding! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Perhaps the next art project should be Crumple Horned Snorkacks. Just a thought.

Author's Response: Nothing's going to stop Harry from bringing Ginny to that wedding. :) He'll get there even if he has to Floo in on a stretcher.

Crumple-Horned Snorkacks? We'll need to bring in a consultant for that! Oh Luna...



Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2007.07.08 - 09:24PM Title: A Spot of Tea

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Oh my, you truly are a master of funny fluff! And you do great Fred and George. I'll definitely keep reading even if it isn't all posted before DH!

Author's Response: Hey thanks. I'm chuffed that you think my Fred and George are great. I love the twins. And thanks for saying you'll keep reading on!



Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2007.07.08 - 05:38PM Title: A Spot of Tea

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WOW. Definitley your most fun chapter yet. Loved Molly embarrassing the boy with her knowledge of sex. Where do they think that lot came from, Huh? The only thing I missed would be Tonks looking around for the polite company (ala the three stooges). Your Fred and George reached new heights, or depths, whichever you prefer. But don't they know by now that matching wits with Ginny is extremly dangerous, Good Girl!

Author's Response: Tonks would know that looking around for polite company at The Burrow is an exercise in futility. :) Fred and George have got their comeuppance, but don't you think that they'll use this to their advantage in some way? LOL. Although I do think that they'd be happy for Ginny if she and Harry got together.



Reviewer: jennymafurr Signed Date: 2007.07.08 - 05:18PM Title: A Spot of Tea

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awww.

those kids are adorable.

-Jenny


Author's Response: Yep, they are!




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