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Reviewer: jlgg Anonymous Date: 2016.11.10 - 02:16AM Title: The Wedding Date

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Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2016.06.18 - 10:13AM Title: The Wedding Date

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Laughed so hard reading about David, Joshua and Adam lol. Yes, Harry will be Ginny's date for the wedding



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.10.08 - 07:40AM Title: The Wedding Date

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aww, such a sweet chapter
I really loved the lines -

Harry looked troubled. “Well, no,” he admitted reluctantly before he shot back, “but isn’t he too old for you?”

Ginny held back a snigger at Harry’s pathetic objection. “He’s only a year older than me!”

“Precisely!”

“Harry, you’re only a year older than me.”

“Well, yeah…” said Harry, nonplussed. “It’s just that…”



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.06.06 - 07:16PM Title: The Wedding Date

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Yay! They're going to the wedding together! I just hope no stupid fan girls spoil it for Ginny.



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.07.19 - 01:26PM Title: The Wedding Date

Well done they finally made a move I liked it well done about time I mean he has been wanting this from 6th year in your universe



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.08.12 - 12:05AM Title: The Wedding Date

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The near kiss has really got to stick in Ginny's mind as to whether he intended it or not. How can she come to any other conclusion with all the flirting going on?

The continuing banter on a flirtatious level continues to amuse me and when Harry finally admits his knowledge of Seamus' message and almost admits his jealousy, and he really was, and Ginny again misses this so obvious signal just like the kiss ...... it is moments like this that makes your story so pleasureable.

The final invite even has its moments of self confession, and if only both of them could listen to their internal heartbeats ..... well, maybe the trip to italy will end in some tangible results.

Author's Response: Well, you know, at the heart of all of this is the uncertainty that both feel about the other's feelings. I suppose that they do want to act on their feelings but neither want to lose their friendhsip in case they're mistaken about it.



Reviewer: firestar Signed Date: 2007.08.08 - 06:05PM Title: The Wedding Date

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Sorry to be picky, but they're suposed to be in England and we don't have Blue Jays. We do have Jays but they don't have a particularly nice song, so i would suggest a Black bird or Blue Tit

Love your dishy Harry.

Author's Response: LOL. Oh no! I suppose I'll change it to a blackbird then, because the second option may make certain juvenile minds (such as mine) begin sniggering uncontrollably.

I love my dishy Harry too!



Reviewer: UnorthodoxConvention Signed Date: 2007.07.06 - 08:33AM Title: The Wedding Date

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Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2007.07.05 - 07:22PM Title: The Wedding Date

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Heh. "Italy" is a fairly big place. (As a former roommate explained to me, her answer was accurate, but imprecise.)

Good move on Harry's part, bringing food to some Weasleys. That's got to be worth a few points. :-)

And it seems that there's been a start towards a bit of "air clearing" between Harry & Giiny, though I'm sure that process has barely begun. Perhpas they'll have a chance to chat a bit during the boring parts of Sylvia's wedding to the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle guy. :-}

Seems to me that considering Harry's experience with "family," he's being remarkably good with the children. Has Ginny noticed this yet? Or perhaps it will take someone else pointing it out before she realizes it, eh? :-} Or perhaps the time with Moony, Tonks, & Randall will provide an opportunity for either of those to occur..... :-)

(I confess I find Ginny's reaction to Harry all the more amusing because I have a certain degree of difficulty imagining that someone would find a guy physically attractive. Yeah, I know some folks do, which is probably a Good Thing all told, but I can't help but think that Harry's reaction to Ginny is more likely something with which I'd identify. :-})

Excellent! :-)

Author's Response: Hmmm... I think that maybe I can get away with saying that I've always thought that Harry would be good with children, because he knows exactly how you're NOT supposed to treat them. :)

I don't think Harry's even registered that they're going to another country - he's busy congratulating himself on successfully asking Ginny out without resorting to odd grunts and run-in sentences. LOL.



Reviewer: AwesomeGryffindor Signed Date: 2007.07.05 - 10:04AM Title: The Wedding Date

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I feel that most people become afflicted with the “Must-Snog-Harry-Potter-Senseless-Or-P er ish-In-The-Attempt Syndrome” - it's quite a phenomenon in fact, lol. Excellent! A potential Harry and Ginny adventure in Italy, with some snogging I hope! Can't wait to see what's next!

Author's Response: Yup, you're looking at the first diagnosed case of MSHPSOPITAS right here! LOL!



Reviewer: Va Guy Signed Date: 2007.07.05 - 08:36AM Title: The Wedding Date

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So why did the chapter give you a headache? I thought the interaction of Ginny and Harry with the kids was brilliant. Ginny's inner monologue which finally screamed at her not to let him walk away, was well done and funny.

I can see Harry and Ginny now staring and just grinning like mad at each other, once Ginny cleared up that "minor detail".

Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Hi mike. This chapter was supposed to be up the other day, but something always went wrong - the site was down, the story wouldn't upload, I kept changing my mind about things at the last minute... Tylenol time!

Ginny's inner monologue is actually me whispering in her ear - so of course I had to scream at the girl to get a move on! Hee hee.



Reviewer: DarkLady Anonymous Date: 2007.07.05 - 05:22AM Title: The Wedding Date

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Oh I forgot to add... I knew that I was forgetting something..

The ward.... Oh dear that had me in giggling fits... I think she should just jump Harry and get it over with... I want something raunchy and sexy and naughty... Haha... Anyway... I wouldn't be surprised if there was a few occupants in that ward already...

*giggles*

Author's Response: I'll see you in that ward, Shaheen!



Reviewer: DarkLady Anonymous Date: 2007.07.05 - 05:11AM Title: The Wedding Date

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OMG OMG Oh My God.... Sorry too much of Caramel Fudge.
Well... What to say...
Firstly I have to say that doing the fan girl dance is very simple really... All you have to do is dance around in circles without getting dizzy... Then you have add some shimmies in there... Then you twirl and shimmy and go in and out at the same time whilst shaking your hips...

Haha... *does the fangirl dance*

Now getting on with the review...
Harry in a white shirt and tight fitting jeans, my goodness woman you had me drooling... Then I thought of my boyfriend and I very nearly fainted... See what you do to me??
I say the happy families thing is coming along very well... The kiddies seem to be enjoying themselves.... Haha the bit about Ginny and dating other guys... Molly reminds me of my mum time to time... I know, but my mum's not as bad...

Hmmm Harry and Ginny in Italy together... Alone... Away from everyone... I seem to be getting ideas in my head...

Anyway before I start babbling and this review gets WAY too long.. Sorry that it gave you a headache.. Hope you feel better soon.

Thanks for a wonderful chapter... And I hope to read more soon.

By the way.... Keep going the way you're going with all your great work and I think I might just dedicate a story too you... Hope you don't mind... I will ask permission first though...

Shaheen...


Author's Response: I think I'll pass on the fangirl dance. My hips would be protesting even before i could take one step.

Your boyfriend sounds like a really yummy speciment of manhood. Lucky you!

You'd dedicate a story to li'l ol' me? I'd be honoured!



Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2007.07.04 - 11:28PM Title: The Wedding Date

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I love all the funky and funny little details you put in "her eyes seeking out the large charred spot in the centre that was the direct result of her dad’s experiments with Muggle matches and something called petrol. When the silence stretched out for so long that the burnt area began resembling the profile of Mad-Eye Moody, complete with revolving magical eye" just brilliant! Little touches that really flesh out and give character to a story. Love it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you picked up and appreciated those things. I like placing myself in the characters' shoes, so those details are something I imagine they would see or hear. Alternating POV's between Harry and Ginny are kind of driving me barmy though. I love it anyway! :)



Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2007.07.04 - 09:18PM Title: The Wedding Date

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Still with you. I particularly liked the end of this chapter...of course. :)

I love Ginny's internal dialogues. You have a great sense of humor, and it particularly shines in those portions. And in the beginning with Hermione when they were on the porch I was laughing out loud over Ginny's plans to drive the Knight Bus because Stan Shunpike is dead gorgeous and his spots are nearly gone. It's been a while since I read it, but I haven't forgotten.

I also liked Harry's part where he was not watching her like a stalker etc. Great work.

Author's Response: Hi Debbie. I'm glad my sense of humour isn't coming across as flaky, which it sometimes (most of the time?) is! And Stan Shunpike? *sighs dreamily* :)



Reviewer: hummingbird Signed Date: 2007.07.04 - 09:17PM Title: The Wedding Date

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Oh! That darn juice spilling! I was about to lean into my computer in anticipation of the kiss. I figured that Harry had been lusting after Ginny in the tattered old bathing suit and finally, unable to take it any more, went for gold. Why don't fiction writers ever give us the kiss when we want it? I've been celebrating the 4th of July all day (sorry to any British readers!) and what a treat to find a new, really eventful, chapter. I'm thinking that gondolas and opera-singing waiters and fine italian wine (are they old enough?) would make for a lovely little wedding date. It is a date, right?

Author's Response: Yes, it's a date - they just have to get there! And fanfic writers don't give you the kiss scene when you want it because they're saving up for a monumental snogging extravaganza! LOL.



Reviewer: LuvinHG Signed Date: 2007.07.04 - 06:26PM Title: The Wedding Date

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WooHoo! What another wonderful chapter. HG's progress is moving quite nicely I have to admit. I love the smiles they're giving one another. Ginny unsureness about Harry's feelings is cute. Anyone with eyes can see Harry is quite smitten with her. She better open up her eyes and take notice before he gives up on her. hehe.

Thanks for another great chapter. You're doing a fanstatic job on the story. I love it. I absolutely can't wait until the wedding now. And it's in Italy? This should be good.

Dee

Author's Response: Hi Dee. I think that Ginny's eyes have already been prised open by forces beyond her control. :)

Thanks for the kind words.



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2007.07.04 - 06:20PM Title: The Wedding Date

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OMG! Are those two slow or what!

Nice chapter! Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Not really slow, just a little bit blind when it comes to each other! :)



Reviewer: Hajra Signed Date: 2007.07.04 - 05:50PM Title: The Wedding Date

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Ah I smell romance in the air! I love the image of Harry throwing a hissy fit! Also I'm loving Harry making subtle moves on Ginny - Go Harry!

Author's Response: Harry's hissy fit would be something to see indeed! I'd wager that he'd still look cute while he was throwing a wobbly. :)



Reviewer: GypsyWeasley Signed Date: 2007.07.04 - 03:52PM Title: The Wedding Date

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Longer......LONGERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR RRR chapters, please. This is killing me!!!!

Author's Response: Longer chapters? O-kay, I'll certainly try, but I rather like them short and sweet! Besides, they're not that short, are they?




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