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Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed
Date: 2016.06.18 - 10:01AM
Title: Floo Calls
The scene where Ginny was comforting the kids is my ultimate favorite here
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed
Date: 2009.10.07 - 02:39PM
Title: Floo Calls
ha ha, as I predicted!
I can only hope that Harry will now pull his head out of his arse and do somehting about his feeligns for Ginny ;)
Reviewer: pottermania Signed
Date: 2009.06.06 - 06:54PM
Title: Floo Calls
Hope he just passes on the message and telle her he will escort her instead..dont leave her with any option!!
Reviewer: piltad Signed
Date: 2008.07.19 - 01:11PM
Title: Floo Calls
ahh jelousy is a great thing lol really like how you have thrown that into the story. That should really pick up the story quite abit I am sure that the next chapter will be smashing.
Reviewer: eaglebird Signed
Date: 2007.08.11 - 11:42PM
Title: Floo Calls
Ooooh, lots of goodies here.
I absolutely adored Harry's feast on Ginny's legs in her short nightie and really laughed when he was wondering if she was starkers underneath! Their playful banter and forward nuances show they are just two randy young people just waiting for the right opportunity to jump each oother.
Harry's intercepted message about the wedding should send a signal for Seamus to "back off" and for Harry to get moving or someone else is going to get her first.
Author's Response: Randy is the right word, but that randiness is mixed in with true affection for each other!
Reviewer: Russtopher Signed
Date: 2007.08.10 - 08:50PM
Title: Floo Calls
I really like the buildup of the tension... it's real, but still lighthearted and not overly angsty. Very nice writing, great story!
Author's Response: Thanks! Real, light-hearted and not overly angsty was what I was aiming for!
Reviewer: firestar Signed
Date: 2007.08.08 - 05:46PM
Title: Floo Calls
Fantastic story. Witty and well written.
But we don't have 'Bangers and Mash' for breakfast, thats a dinner dish.
Author's Response: Oh, okay. LOL. Now you've caught on that I'm not British. I'll just change it to bacon and eggs, then, is that alright? Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed
Date: 2007.07.06 - 09:31PM
Title: Floo Calls
Dang it! You just HAD to throw some more stones in their way, didn't you?!? AAaarrggh! I can just see Harry getting jealous and then Ginny getting hissy with him over that! Oh well, I guess that'll make the story longer, so I won't complain...but it's hard to wait for the final resolve...;-)
Oh, and my favorite line:
“Although what you’re wearing right now isn’t half bad, you know."
Cheeky little bugger!
Author's Response: I hope you read the chapter after this, so you know what happened next, and who was the one who actually threw the hissy fit! LOL.
Yep, that Harry's one cheeky little bugger, isn't he?
Reviewer: kingbobrules Signed
Date: 2007.07.03 - 03:22PM
Title: Floo Calls
I've just read Ur whole fic in 1 go and I haven't chorteled so much in a long time! The banta U've got going on is great and very realistic - I just love this fic! I can't wait until Ur next update.
Author's Response: I'm very happy that you chortled along with the story. The latest chapter's been posted, so I hope you enjoy that too.
Reviewer: Sovran Signed
Date: 2007.07.03 - 02:11PM
Title: Floo Calls
Ha! Why is it that all of us seem inclined to latch onto the worst possible interpretation of anything we hear? There are simpler, better possibilities, but somehow we never think of them.
I'm really enjoying Ginny and Harry in this one. They feel like slightly-matured versions of their student selves, which is of course the point. I was surprised, though, to find myself really liking Ron and Hermione. Clearly it's a h/g story, and I want to know what's going to happen with them, but I find myself looking forward to the next appearance by one of the supporting couple. You have the young adult interaction of all four of them down pat, in all 6 relationships, from start to finish.
Please, sir (ma'am), may we have some more?
Author's Response: Yeah, that was what I was aiming for - a slightly more mature but still zany H/G relationship. As to R/Hr, although I do like this couple too, I enjoy writing them more as amazing supportive characters.
Reviewer: AshesHinny4ever Anonymous
Date: 2007.07.03 - 02:19AM
Title: Floo Calls
Aww he got all jealous it was cute
and I know! I can't wait for Deathly Hallows! except..I dont want it to be over!! and I know I'm gonna cry my eyes out when people die..ahh noo =[
well its 2am here so bed
Update soon! I like this story and I want to see how he convinces her and what she does
but this winking flirting thing doesnt seem to work..cause she thinks he doesnt mean it. Silly Ginny.
Author's Response: Thanks for leaving such great reviews, Ashley! And I don't want the HP series to be over yet either.
Reviewer: Lamia Signed
Date: 2007.07.02 - 06:10PM
Title: Floo Calls
hee hee, obviously I meant *Ginny* go to the wedding with Harry,he could hardly go with himself could he...well he could but thats not what I meant...ok I'm making no sense. Also just wanted to say how I love how each chapter switches between Harry's and Ginny's personal point of view, so clever. Anyway, can't wait for more :D
~Lamia~
Author's Response: Oh, okay. Although I do agree that Harry could go with himself - it's just that both he and Ginny will be miserable! :) I'm glad you like the alternating POV. It's actually very hard not to slip up and write Harry while I should be writing Ginny and vice-versa!
Reviewer: Lamia Signed
Date: 2007.07.02 - 06:02PM
Title: Floo Calls
Loved it again, this chapter had me grinning all the way through. I really hope Harry goes to the wedding with Harry, I can't wait for more
~Lamia~
Author's Response: Hi Lamia.That's a good thing to do - grinning all the time you were reading! But Harry taking himself to the wedding? :)
Reviewer: hjp74 Signed
Date: 2007.07.02 - 02:23PM
Title: Floo Calls
what a wonderful chapter i relly liked harry internal dialog with himself & it funny how similer it becoming to ginnys when shes thinking of him so i guess it wont be long before they finally relise that they each feel the same way about each other. Harry intemdating seamus over the foo network was pretty cool & it`s good to see that harry can get some advantage out of being the boy who defeated thedark lord although you have to feel a bit sorry for seamus as there he was having what he thought was a nice frendly chat when harry lets him know in pretty uncertan terms that ginnys off limits. Speaking of ginny i just love the fact that she was completly oblivous to the effect that she was having on harry in that dressing gown & the picture of her with the two kids was just perfect & am surprised harry was so controled that he didnt make his move there & then.
Defenatly looking forward to harry talking ginny into taking him to the wedding just dont have ginny wear anything to reveling as he might just go into shock.
James
Author's Response: Hi James. Like Hermione said, Harry sounds exactly like Ginny sometimes, and they don't even know it! I promise to have Ginny wear something less revealing, although I have a feeling that whatever she wears, she's sure to get a reaction out of Harry. ;)
Reviewer: Athea Signed
Date: 2007.07.02 - 12:52PM
Title: Floo Calls
Oh no, she didn't ask Seamus. What is that girl thinking? Hopefully Harry will calmly correct her error in judgement. :)
And I forgot last chapter, but I loved the wedding invite...The TMNT and "Sylvia" To quote my Grandmother, "What a hoot!"
Author's Response: Hi Erika. I see you too have fallen for Infamous Seamus' charms! LOL. Not to worry, I know that our boy Harry will pull through.
Reviewer: Va Guy Signed
Date: 2007.07.02 - 09:53AM
Title: Floo Calls
"She’s not going on any date with anybody but me." Alright Harry is finally going to take charge....if Ginny let's him ;). I'm sure Harry won't say "Youwangoweddingwithme" :)
Loved to read Harry's reaction to Ginny's dressing gown. Did she plan to wear it or was it something she just threw on to get to the crying child as fast as possible?
Can't wait for the next chapter. Will that be the wedding? I love them, been to quite a few (can't write about them) but most of them were great.
I've said it before, but I'll keep repeating it. I always enjoy reading your stories, you do a fantastic job with the characterizations, and scene settings. I particularly like the way you write the relationships, They are very true to life, the wild emotions, the sexual tension so think it could be cut with a knife and all the while keeping the story PG-13 for the younger readers. Now that being said, if you write it I want to read it. You're a fantastic fic writer.
Author's Response: Hi Mike. I, for one, would like to see Ginny's reaction if Harry does use 'blurtish' - "Wannagoweddingwime?" to ask her out. Will she say, "Sorry, I didn't quite catch that?" to quote Katie Leung from the GOF movie? :)
Ah, that infamous dressing gown. I would suppose that Ginny had no idea that Harry would be there already when she burst into the room. Can you imagine what would have happened to poor Harry if she had forgotten to put it on at all? So, WAS Ginny starkers under that gown? Hee hee.
Thanks for the kind words, Mike. And the reason that I only write PG-13 is that I cannot write R rated stories. Believe me, I tried, and ended up making me cringe in embarrassment myself! LOL.
Reviewer: LuvinHG Signed
Date: 2007.07.01 - 10:30PM
Title: Floo Calls
Everytime I see an update I get excited. I'm glad your updates are regular. This was another fantastic chapter. You are doing such an awesome job with this story. I loved the conversation between Harry and Hermione in this chapter. Their closeness is very kewl. Hermione needs to have a conversation with Ginny and clue her in on Harry's feelings. Or at least hint about them.
I loved the last paragraph in this chapter. I can't wait to see how Harry tries to be Ginny's date to the wedding. Perfectly brilliant! Keep up the good work. :)
Dee
Author's Response: Hi Dee. Your review is also very kewl. :) Hermione and Ginny will have a heart-to-heart talk soon.
Reviewer: swimsocceg Signed
Date: 2007.07.01 - 09:59PM
Title: Floo Calls
hehe ooo this is good and i love the frequant updates keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thank you. I like frequently updating too, since I get such nice reviews like this.
Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed
Date: 2007.07.01 - 05:29PM
Title: Floo Calls
I just loved the last paragraph! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Oh, you liked Harry's steely resolve to woo the fair Ginevra over, or at least to strongarm her into taking him as her date, eh? LOL. Determined Harry is almost as cute as Clueless Harry, isn't he? Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Leiselily Signed
Date: 2007.07.01 - 05:11PM
Title: Floo Calls
Hello! Sorry I haven't been reviewing regularly ; things have been mad and I've been having to print off and read your chapters away from the PC. Of course whan a new chapter comes up I'm too busy printing to review the last one!
I am thoroughly enjoying this though. I love the characterisation and the humour, and the way Harry and Ginny are cringingly embarassed with each other. Just how is Harry going to break down Ginny's determined resistance? Looking forward to finding out.
Author's Response: Hi Leise. That's quite alright. I'm just glad you're still enjoying the story. Cringingly embarrassed about each other is one way to call the sexual tension between them. :)
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