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Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2016.06.18 - 09:16AM Title: Release from St Mungo's

My 10th time reading this story



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.10.07 - 02:07PM Title: Release from St Mungo's

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aww, sweet chapter
when is Harry going to take the cobwebs off his eyes?



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.06.06 - 05:40PM Title: Release from St Mungo's

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Hhmm I'm just wondering if Ginny and Harry are being set up. Are Bill and Fleur really going away with work, or if they are do they HAVE to leave the children behind (an anways I am positive Molly would manage admirably on her own). Just wondering if this is a big plot by the others to get them "together"!!



Reviewer: 7Ginny7 Signed Date: 2008.08.23 - 11:07AM Title: Release from St Mungo's

'It was Ginny.'
Man, i LUV it!!



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.07.19 - 11:59AM Title: Release from St Mungo's

Very nice would probably be a bit better if you had one maybe just figuring there is no chance and that it is over might add more drama I just don't see this as a challenge I guess that you can stretch into a long story which is what I want since love your writing so far.



Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2008.05.05 - 09:20PM Title: Release from St Mungo's

“Bloody hell, she’s the one leading the way,” declared Ron smugly . . . .

Great line! You have such a way with words!



Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2008.05.05 - 09:20PM Title: Release from St Mungo's

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“Bloody hell, she’s the one leading the way,” declared Ron smugly . . . .

Great line! You have such a way with words!



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.08.10 - 06:49PM Title: Release from St Mungo's

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Loved the knickers.

Daughter Cordeli sounds interesting. I wonder what plot bunnies you have about her. Opportunities unlimited there!

And Ginny arrives. But I can't see any sparks right off the bat. i'm hoping for at east one little talk. But they do have those two misunderstood conversations in the backs of their minds and they will cloud the initial talks.

Author's Response: I would suppose that any athlete or any famous personality would get all sorts of weird stuff in the mail!

Cordelia will make an appearance, but not until much much later.

Next chapter should bring about that talk you were hoping for.



Reviewer: AshesHinny4ever Anonymous Date: 2007.07.02 - 08:47PM Title: Release from St Mungo's

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HARRY POTTER, NEARLY DECAPITATED AT QUIDDITCH MATCH!


Haha yes his head almost flew off!!


Why did she send him knickers if she didn't leave a name or number? come on thats no fun! hehe
hmm maybe it was Cordelia...


ooh Scrimgeour, what a player!


Haha looks like the spongebath is the nurses favorite part of the day!

‘dragging Hermione down the path of sin’ hehe
I sure wouldn't mind if he wanted to drag me down the path of sin...lol

okay. Now finally I'll be getting to them together...lol

Author's Response: Who knows if one of Harry's teammates pocketed the info on the witch who sent the knickers? LOL.



Reviewer: DarkLady Anonymous Date: 2007.06.25 - 09:12AM Title: Release from St Mungo's

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Gosh the poor bugger is like so in love with her.

*giggles* It's 11pm at night and I just drank coffee...

Haha...

Shaheen

Author's Response: Yeah, but an in-love Harry is a good thing!



Reviewer: Leiselily Signed Date: 2007.06.20 - 06:53AM Title: Release from St Mungo's

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Oh! Tell her now Harry! Tell her right now!

Another funny chapter. Ron's swearing was spot on, as was his assessment of the hospital food. I loved the nurse too, and her excitement at giving Gilderoy his sponge bath. Ewww!

I'm glad this is coming quickly, I'm addicted already...

Author's Response: Hi Leise. Oh, I finally got the swearing bit down, have I? LOL. I cen never tell if I'm using the word 'bloody' correctly. Thanks for the review, and the next chapter should be up anytime today or tomorrow.



Reviewer: Hajra Signed Date: 2007.06.19 - 09:51AM Title: Release from St Mungo's

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Love truly is blind! It seems everyone excep Harry and Ginny know how they feel about each other! Yay - Ginny and Harry at the Burrow together - I can't wait for the sparks and unresolved sexual tension!
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Author's Response: Hi Hajra. Yep, love is blind, or in this case, very shortsighted indeed. Or maybe just really thick? :)



Reviewer: LuvinHG Signed Date: 2007.06.18 - 09:49PM Title: Release from St Mungo's

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I have only one complaint about this chapter. It was too darn short.

I love, love, love it. Keep up the good work.
Dee

Author's Response: Really? I thought it was too darn long! :) Thanks for your kind words.



Reviewer: Va Guy Signed Date: 2007.06.18 - 02:15PM Title: Release from St Mungo's

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They're together, woo hoo. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response: Woo hoo indeed!



Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2007.06.18 - 01:30PM Title: Release from St Mungo's

Ok i got cut off half way through my review 7 i cant delete it so here`s the second part

Harry looking at all the photos was vey nice esspecally the one of ginnys graduation & his regret at not going he relly is unluky when it comes to ginny & timing of course that alows you to build up the carecter & give them the happy endiing in style

Iam actuley hopping cordelia turns up at the burrow & there nothing like a atractive gold digger to put ginny in her protect harry mode some thing you do very well.

James


Author's Response: So, Harry's really the unlucky one here, but I'm guessing his luck's about to change. A lot of people responded to Harry's looking at the photo! Guess everyone's rooting for our hero, eh?



Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2007.06.18 - 01:21PM Title: Release from St Mungo's

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Great Chapter oved the bit in the hospitall with first ron getting slug flavored bean poor gur relly dosent get meny breaks dose he & then the whole thong conversation very funny plus the fact that ron seams to have a better idea than harry relises about how he feels about ginny so thats one less thing to worry avout..

Author's Response: Oh, I think that Ron's actually pretty lucky in this case. He's already got the girl, and his best friend's about to become... part of the family? :) Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: Delani Anonymous Date: 2007.06.17 - 11:47PM Title: Release from St Mungo's

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Ooo!

Well I say you know how to make us laugh! That line about Hermione 'leading the way' was great...

I'm really excited to see where this goes and yay! she updates quickly! Oh praise Merlin! ;)


Del

Author's Response: Praise Merlin indeed. :) Thanks for saying that I made you laugh. That made me smile.



Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp Signed Date: 2007.06.17 - 10:14PM Title: Release from St Mungo's

CLIFFY!?! haha i how all the guys were talking about the thong :P lol

Author's Response: Thanks again!



Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp Signed Date: 2007.06.17 - 10:14PM Title: Release from St Mungo's

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CLIFFY!?! haha i how all the guys were talking about hte thong :P

Author's Response: Well, guys will talk about thongs, wouldn't they? I just hope it's not because they want to wear one! LOL.



Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2007.06.17 - 09:35PM Title: Release from St Mungo's

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Slug flavored Bertie Botts, Nice One. Also liked spongebath for Lockhart. Reminded me of bedtime for Bonzo. And what did Harry do with those scarlet knickers? I'm thinking they may make a re-appearance.

Author's Response: Those slughs would have had to make an impact on Ron, right? First time he defended his lady love! Oh, and I'm glad you picked up the spongebath for Lockhart - I imagine the nurses would be fighting over who would get that duty. LOL.

Those scarlet knickers may have very well disappeared - I suspect that the matron would have nicked them!




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