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Reviewer: BigFatMaybe Signed Date: 2016.01.31 - 01:46AM Title: Epilogue

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Excellent, awesome story. Loved it to bits!

Your characters were believable, true to their nature and realistic. The happenings too, except for one thing: instead of being tortured, Voldemort should have just come in, crucio'd Harry a bit before ripping all the knowledge from his mind. Legillimency on the level of Voldemort defeats the purpose of prolonged torture, especially as Harry isn't good at occlumency at all.

Also, I'm conflicted about the end. On the one hand, it's a wonderful place to end. It's hopeful in the darkest times. But seeing as you last updated your stories in 2008, I don't hold much hope for an ending. Shame, shame!

Anyway, if you would once read this (probably not), thanks for the story. I loved it.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2010.11.20 - 11:26PM Title: Epilogue

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I really enjoyed the story up to the end. I was kind of disappointed that while the "alternate" world got a quick ending, the "real" world storyline just kind of stopped with no real resolution to all the problems they still faced. It really seemd like there should have been more.



Reviewer: colmshan1990 Signed Date: 2010.05.09 - 02:47AM Title: Epilogue

Wow.
I have never read a story like this. You went above and beyond the call of fanfiction, and this story...
Well, if you ever get your own stuff published, I'll be first in line. This went way beyond being another story based on the Harry Potter world, but became purely outstanding in your own right.
No exagerration. I started reading this around 1 o'clock in the morning. I thought I'd read a chapter or two before sleep. It's not 7.45, I'm exhausted, but exhilarated after finshing this story.
Please write a follow-up, I'm begging you.
PS. Is your name Rowling? If so, this is your best book.



Reviewer: colmshan1990 Signed Date: 2010.05.09 - 02:46AM Title: Epilogue

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Wow.
I have never read a story like this. You went above and beyond the call of fanfiction, and this story...
Well, if you ever get your own stuff published, I'll be first in line. This went way beyond being another story based on the Harry Potter world, but became purely outstanding in your own right.
No exagerration. I started reading this around 1 o'clock in the morning. I thought I'd read a chapter or two before sleep. It's not 7.45, I'm exhausted, but exhilarated after finshing this story.
Please write a follow-up, I'm begging you.
PS. Is your name Rowling? If so, this is your best book.



Reviewer: heavyheartx26 Signed Date: 2008.12.29 - 12:10AM Title: Epilogue

i loved this story! usually i only read fanfiction thats pure fluff, but i actually really enjoyed this! please write a sequel! (:



Reviewer: Mystical Magical Me Signed Date: 2008.09.30 - 06:12PM Title: Epilogue

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Wow, I don't usually like AU fics, but you really pulled this one off well! Amazing job! Although, Harry seems to take the existence of his parent, siruis and a sister that shouldn't exist very well. Otherwise, great job, especially with leila!



Reviewer: marinepotterfan Signed Date: 2008.08.02 - 11:17AM Title: Epilogue

This is the second time I have read this story and I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you start the sequel soon. I would like to see how you have things turn out.

Thanks for writing
MPF



Reviewer: i_lay_my_head_down Signed Date: 2008.07.19 - 07:24AM Title: Epilogue

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I only read this story recently (yesterday) and I pretty much finished it in one day because it really captivated me from start to finish. It was really impressive the way that everything seemed to fit together and it wasn't like some of those AU stories out there that are randomly made up as the writer went along, this was clearly well thought out, and you did an amazing job!
It was extremely clever the way that Sirius (I think) was very true to the character that JKR gave us even though we didn't see too much of him in the books untarnished by years in Azkaban and again I think you should be applauded for this.

However I would go through and check for little spelling mistakes (Pomfrey I think was spelt wrong) and just silly things like that. Apart from that it was a brilliant read, well done :)
Can't wait for the sequel and I hope we get a few more precious Harry/Ginny moments in this next story :)



Reviewer: Hobs Signed Date: 2008.02.23 - 06:16PM Title: Epilogue

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This is such a great story!!!!!!!!!! When are you going to write the sequel? Please, do it soon, I'm waiting in suspence!



Reviewer: Hychyr Signed Date: 2008.01.10 - 02:59AM Title: Epilogue

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This is my favorite AU story ever



Reviewer: Harry GiNiny POttEr Signed Date: 2007.12.02 - 04:03PM Title: Epilogue

It was a wonderful story you did a great job!!!?!?!



Reviewer: Harry GiNiny POttEr Signed Date: 2007.12.02 - 04:03PM Title: Epilogue

It was a wonderful story you did a great job!!!?!?!



Reviewer: Harry GiNiny POttEr Signed Date: 2007.12.02 - 04:03PM Title: Epilogue

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It was a wonderful story you did a great job!!!?!?!



Reviewer: ShadowFang Signed Date: 2007.11.30 - 09:14PM Title: Epilogue

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good chapter
weres the sequal!?
Ginny and Theodore?EWWW!



Reviewer: Zapatorf Signed Date: 2007.11.30 - 11:41AM Title: Epilogue

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Wonderful. The true spirit of a writer flows through your veins. This is, without a doubt, one of the most creative things I have ever read. From beginning to end, it was impeccable in almost every way possible. I fully hope you will not stop here annd that you can continue to prove that you can captivate us all with the intricate weaving of plots, subplots, and wonderful characterization. Not only will I be giving this the best score I can, but I will spread word of this story far and wide, so as to share it with the world. I have little doubt that if J.K. Rowling herself was to read this, she would wholeheartedly approve.



Reviewer: lazzyboy5540 Signed Date: 2007.11.29 - 08:24PM Title: Epilogue

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how about the world as we KNOW it



Reviewer: marinepotterfan Signed Date: 2007.11.29 - 01:38PM Title: Epilogue

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I really enjoyed reading your story, I can't wait for the sequel. My susgestion for the name would be "The World as We Make It".

Thanks for Writing.
MPF



Reviewer: Belcris Signed Date: 2007.11.29 - 02:51AM Title: Epilogue

Bravo! :)



Reviewer: Belcris Signed Date: 2007.11.29 - 02:51AM Title: Epilogue

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Bravo! :)



Reviewer: RiverChild Signed Date: 2007.11.28 - 08:25PM Title: Epilogue

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Wow. I've been following this story for a while, and I can honestly say this is one of the best I've ever read. The AU was well thought out, not just slapped together. The characterization was perfect and the OC's believable, a rarity in fanfiction. And the epilouge was brilliant, I loved it. Definitely looking forward to a sequel.

Congrats,
RiverChild




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