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Reviewer: wallflower Signed Date: 2007.10.08 - 09:05AM Title: The Aperio Reversed, part two
I don't think you made it too easy. You made it perfect. Like, you told us about all the hours of researching they did - but you didn't really include it cos it's boring. That's exactly what they do in the first and second harry books, and it works, and it's a useful device, andd you're good. i'm so so glad leila went back with them. i was almost crying thinking about her being left behind. and you're so right about hermione, she would be freakin smarter than flamel if she'd gone to beauxbatons.
i cannot wait to click on the next chapter! it was awesome! and i think you described it really well, especially the way they had to be connected and the marble/wood floors was a cool thing to add, and the triquetra symbol - like on charmed haha.
absolutely awesome!
Reviewer: UnorthodoxConvention Signed Date: 2007.10.06 - 03:00AM Title: The Aperio Reversed, part two
yay! i'm super super happy that leila's back with harry- hope she recovers! Thanks again for the wonderful story!
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.10.06 - 02:48AM Title: The Aperio Reversed, part two
Thanks for bringing Leila back with Harry. To leave her would have been akin to leaving Ginny for that year with the Carrows, only worse.
Darian
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.10.06 - 01:36AM Title: The Aperio Reversed, part two
oh, for sryin' out loud...those who have nominated have already done so (myself included) and it wasn't because you bullied me into it...it was because of your writing!
Your story is brittiant, but you are becoming obcessive about the DSTA.
Reviewer: harry_ginny1234 Signed Date: 2007.10.05 - 07:11PM Title: The Aperio Reversed, part two
please tell me you are going to write a sequel
I want to read more about the Potter siblings and how they interact with Ginny.
enjoyable story to this point
look forward to the rest of it
Reviewer: elaithin Signed Date: 2007.10.05 - 06:08PM Title: The Aperio Reversed, part two
Excellent! I was very much hoping that Leila would be able to return with everyone. Looking forward to the reunions with the people of "their" world.
Reviewer: GinnyPotter7 Signed Date: 2007.10.05 - 05:55PM Title: The Aperio Reversed, part two
Excellent!! I hope you're not done because I want to keep reading it!
Reviewer: ShadowFang Signed Date: 2007.10.05 - 05:35PM Title: The Aperio Reversed, part two
wow now that was a good chapter!
The part about Leila and harry was unexpected! Is that like a soulbond or something?
Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2007.10.05 - 03:09PM Title: The Aperio Reversed, part two
The story has developed really well, I always hoped that Leila would come back with them, however it is going to be interesting to see how she is introduced to the others, I assume Harry is going to go back to Hogwarts, They haven't been around since the beginnning of the Holiday and from what was said in a previous Chapter about the soul only bing in one place at a time what happen to them bodies of the three?
Keep up the great work.
Reviewer: MarissaBrienne Signed Date: 2007.10.05 - 01:31PM Title: The Aperio Reversed, part two
I liked this chapter very much. Honestly i don't think it would have fit well if the reversal were any harder && i am incredibly happy that Leila went back. I don't think sending Genny with him woulda been a great idea either. Two Ginnys, in one world? I'd say Harry would have a tough time if it weren't for the fact that the reality might spontaneously combust when the two Ginnys met face to face. HAHA. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Belcris Signed Date: 2007.10.05 - 01:31PM Title: The Aperio Reversed, part two
Interesting. I have to read it again... but very interesting. :)
