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Reviewer: Sakabatou Signed Date: 2007.09.24 - 07:58PM Title: Triumph and Tragedy

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ARRGGGHHHH!!!!! I was first worried for Leila, but Shacklebolts, the Longbottoms, Bill, and Lily and James. Can't Harry get to be with his parents more than a year?



Reviewer: whitefish066 Signed Date: 2007.09.24 - 03:08PM Title: Triumph and Tragedy

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I would think the Order would be little smarter than letting someone in one just a majority vote, I would think the best policy would be that the voting would need to be unanimous, maybe a 9/10 or 7/8 and then I would want to consider there reasons. I realize Voldemort could of found out on his own by piecing what he could from Peter, thats another thing how many highly skilled aurors were in that room, and they just sat there, all except moody who only managed get a grazing hit, then add all the wizards and witches most off whom are exceptional, against one slightly talented (if that) wizard. don't take offense those are about the only two things I think are a little too far fetched.

Taken all together your story is of great quality, I believe one of my top ten favorites, your story is one of only 13 stories in my favorites. Keep up the good work, look forward to seeing how the Order reacts to the attacks, I personally feel the should use the Truth serum on Clark. Oh, that would be a good requirement for entrance into the Order a questionarie under the Truth serum, they would need to be prearranged questions, although the person there questioning should have a tiny bit of leeway with the questions, but not with the important questions: Are you a Death Eater?, Do you support Voldemort?, Are you going give any information about the Order, it's plan, or it's members to anyone outside the side the Order?

Thats enough of my ramblings,
whitefish

Author's Response: Thanks for your insightful review. Pettigrew's escape is what i consider to be the weakest point of my story. But again, he's very good at running and i imagine he's had to dodge quite a few spells in his life. As for the Order letting Clark in, Gryffindors in general are too accepting and trustful. They don't think things through, so letting someone into the Order based on their "clean" slate seems like something the Order would do.



Reviewer: Miltiades Signed Date: 2007.09.24 - 10:52AM Title: Triumph and Tragedy

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Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2007.09.24 - 06:34AM Title: Triumph and Tragedy

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Another great chapter...

Hmm, I wonder if Harry is going to feel guilty that he caused the search for the Horcruxes and now his parents are dead? The interesting thing is that whilst he know has less reason to stay he still has a sister that he never had in the old timeline so that may be enough.

I suspect I know who betrayed them but will wait to see.



Reviewer: wallflower Signed Date: 2007.09.24 - 05:57AM Title: Triumph and Tragedy

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ohhh my god
harry's parents died in this world too!
and poor neville!
ron and harry and neville should stick together now =[
HOW CONVENIENT... clark joins the order, and then somehow Voldemort finds out that the Order is destroying horcruxes.



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.09.24 - 03:12AM Title: Triumph and Tragedy

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Even in this life Harry loses his parents...not to mention he has a sibling that also lost hers.
I think I was most shocked at Bill, and Kingsley.
I would imagine Serius will go on the rampage of the ages. Of course the major question is who is feeding him (Tom) information? We can all speculate, but DRAT, we have to wait for you to tell us!

Darian




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