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Reviewer: Sakabatou Signed
Date: 2007.09.21 - 05:32PM
Title: Quidditch Trials and Talking Snakes
ROFL!! *Crawling back onto chair*
Leila and Draco Ferret. That was funny, but only to Harry and everyone reading your fan-fiction. Harry almost snuck his way out of the Parselmouth thing, but it looks like Clark might have figured he can talk it after Harry nodded to the snake.
Sirius telling Leila and Harry about James and his little broom-show-off-crash, and throwing Wormtail into the lake was funny as well. As for James being the reason first years can't have broom, it could happen since J.K. Rowling said a first year hasn't played Quidditch since Harry in over a century, and she never said the first year broom band was made a century ago. Nice one:)
Good chapter, I'm reading the next one now.
Reviewer: DebbieO Signed
Date: 2007.09.20 - 09:16PM
Title: Quidditch Trials and Talking Snakes
Great job. I'm really loving this story. Hanging on every posting. :)
Reviewer: Miltiades Signed
Date: 2007.09.20 - 03:29PM
Title: Quidditch Trials and Talking Snakes
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Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed
Date: 2007.09.20 - 02:10PM
Title: Quidditch Trials and Talking Snakes
Right now, this is my very favourite story. I look for it, and hope for updates.
I still say Clark is the future version of Delores.
Hayy trying to shuffle what he already knows and what he should know in this time line is fantastic writing...especially the snakes. His snake seemed a tad put out.
His 'detention' with Mad-Eye should be enlightening, at least to one of them, and I'm guessing Mad Eye.
Now that the post DH updates have slowed to a crawl, perhaps validation for the really GOOD stories will be a bit faster.
Darian
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed
Date: 2007.09.20 - 02:09PM
Title: Quidditch Trials and Talking Snakes
Right now, this is my very favourite story. I look for it, and hope for updates.
I still say Clark is the future version of Delores.
Hayy trying to shuffle what he already knows and what he should know in this time line is fantastic writing...especially the snakes. His snake seemed a tad put out.
His 'detention' with Mad-Eye should be enlightening, at least to one of them, and I'm guessing Mad Eye.
Now that the post DH updates have slowed to a crawl, perhaps validation for the really GOOD stories will be a bit faster.
Darian
Reviewer: VegHindu101 Signed
Date: 2007.09.20 - 10:50AM
Title: Quidditch Trials and Talking Snakes
Great job - last time I read your story was through "Ginny" and I was waiting for so long for an update. Then today I found out I had three chapters! Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see how you get H/G together. And Harry not being friends with Ron is just.... wrong... lol. I also am wondering if Hermione will have any role in your story? It saddens me to not see the Trio. Can't wait for the next chapter(s)!
Reviewer: Harrysgiirl Signed
Date: 2007.09.20 - 10:32AM
Title: Quidditch Trials and Talking Snakes
Another amazing chapter! Have you been considering my marriage proposal?
Author's Response: Uh... I'm a girl, btw.
lol, thanks for the review!
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