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Reviewer: lilyevans_Jan30 Signed Date: 2008.07.15 - 01:58PM Title: A Plan, a Game, and a Letter

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Parents can be remarkably dense about their kids, can't they? I love that Leila is suspicious of Harry though, and I'm looking forward to seeing how their relationship developes.

-Mel



Reviewer: Sakabatou Signed Date: 2007.09.08 - 04:25PM Title: A Plan, a Game, and a Letter

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Good chapter. Harry playing as Seeker to hide he sucks at Keeper was cool. I'm liking Liela a lot. No bout she's going to be like Ginny and demand to know why he's acting strange, especially when he said, "Maybe she fogot to show me it," when it was probably Harry who showed her the letter:)



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2007.08.27 - 02:09AM Title: A Plan, a Game, and a Letter

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Whatever can have happened?
What's on Leila's mind?
Jeez, you're good with this things!

Running to the next!



Reviewer: IHateSnakes Signed Date: 2007.05.30 - 09:15AM Title: A Plan, a Game, and a Letter

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Good, though you seem to have a contradictory situation: Are James and Lily in hiding? If so, how could they be teaching or working in the Ministry? Maybe I misread. S.

Author's Response: They are not technically in hiding, because Voldemort never targeted them out because of the prophecy. They as well as Sirius do have to take certain safety precautions since they are members of the Order, but other than that they live ordinary wizarding lives.



Reviewer: James Evans Signed Date: 2007.05.28 - 10:25AM Title: A Plan, a Game, and a Letter

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OMG!!! W hat a gr8 start this has been!!!
i really like the story and it is a gr8 AU, though poor ginny is in Azkaban...but i´m sure harry will save her, right? ;)
well, update soon and keep up the good work...
p.s.: i hope that in the end of the story Harry "doesn´t suddenly wake from a dream"...

Author's Response: Don't worry, he will most certianly NOT wake up and find it all a dream... I hate those endings!



Reviewer: Tron Signed Date: 2007.05.28 - 08:41AM Title: A Plan, a Game, and a Letter

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Poor Harry and Ginny.

I'm sure Harry could come to love this place. He has his whole family plus one sister. Now, he just needs Ginny, Ron, and Hermione to be complete.

Great story - keep up the good work.




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