Reviews For Meaning of One, Part One: Stone and Fire
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2020.04.10 - 03:49PM Title: The Price of Proper Presents I get where they are coming from but they are not thinking clearly and allowing harry and Ginny a way to have them look at what’s going on...Molly thought really screwed up....kutgw Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.04.17 - 03:28AM Title: The Price of Proper Presents Never could figure where it was to be honest, but third floor sounds right.. first is too far away from most the students. Reviewer: Hawk29 Signed Date: 2013.03.22 - 09:56AM Title: The Price of Proper Presents This is a crazy powerful chapter. You've managed to evoke a ton of emotion with your words, so great job. I feel the frustration that Harry and Ginny feel, the anger and fear and desperation. It's a difficult thing for an author to make the reader feel his intended emotions, but you've managed to not only to it in this chapter, but do it as expertly as in any story I've ever read. Reviewer: sunnyseaforever Signed Date: 2012.05.21 - 08:33AM Title: The Price of Proper Presents That was an awesome chapter. What was supposed to be a happy family affair escalated into a massive confrontation. Very well written. Reviewer: BrutallyHonest Signed Date: 2010.01.17 - 12:32AM Title: The Price of Proper Presents that is so sad. i just got back from a retreat where all you do is cry about stuff, and so now im super sensative right now and this did not help lol. GREAT chapter Reviewer: valondon Signed Date: 2009.01.31 - 02:37PM Title: The Price of Proper Presents Great story, great chapter. Oh my god that seems so Molly like with her over portectivness but also so Un Molly like with her treatment to Harry. I always thought Bill was a bit smarter, hmm guess this was one of his bad days. This was incredible writing and had me on suspense throughout the whole chapter. Also with your authors note you said you moved the hospital wing and so did JKR, let me just say if you didn't say that I wouldn't have know that you or JKR did it, I always forget where it is. Once again great chapter. Reviewer: thehbp Signed Date: 2007.08.13 - 09:04AM Title: The Price of Proper Presents oh bugger. You have an amazing style and flow for writing and I can just picture everything. its perfect. except i have a ton of work to do and i told myself i would get back to work once i finished this chapter. and its a cliffy. great. this was a terrible time for me to find this sotry. i am doomed to fail biology. ala.s,. a small price to pay for good fanfiction. Reviewer: lolamadrid Signed Date: 2006.12.16 - 03:18PM Title: The Price of Proper Presents i like the issue that has really raised it's head in this chapter and which will, i think, need to be a big thing for them, that they will have to control their emotions in order to really, well, ultimately, to really fight voldemort i guess or to have realy mastery over their powers. Reviewer: Chatmandu Signed Date: 2006.11.10 - 10:03AM Title: The Price of Proper Presents Whoa. I had to sit back and think about this chapter for a bit. I can see a very clear progression for Molly from the meeting with Dumbledore to Fawkes refusing to attend her. My initial impression was "Man oh man! Sovran must really hate the character Molly Weasley!" But I have a 10 year old son, and a 13 year old daughter. I could not imagine my son involved in something as bizarre and distrubing as the "One Bond" (for lack of a better term). And my daughter, sleeping with some boy who I know only by allegory, doing what Ginny is doing? Shudder. I understand completely how you are portraying Molly; so no, I don't think you hate the character Molly Weasley. Reviewer: Taku Signed Date: 2006.11.03 - 06:10PM Title: The Price of Proper Presents Escape: instead of pulling a dangerous stunt like droping from the ground, they could just have waited a minute. Harry could have reached a safe place and transported Ginny there... Reviewer: fraupapst Anonymous Date: 2006.09.28 - 09:21AM Title: The Price of Proper Presents I just finished reading your story in one go and I'm kind of stunned right now. What an intense chapter. I think you've written the most insensitive present in the whole of HP fanfiction. I hope Molly'll realize how very cruel that was. Reviewer: spiked Signed Date: 2006.09.28 - 07:01AM Title: The Price of Proper Presents Absolutely Awesome Chapter and I am excitedly waiting for more. Now for my take on what will happen... HarryGinny will use the bracelet and project their thoughts on to the Weasley's cause McGonagall never said they were specifically made for her so they know what HarryGinny are feeling... well they are my thoughts at least and could be completely wrong. Keep up the great work.. oh and for the chapter a perfect 10 Reviewer: mjc Signed Date: 2006.09.27 - 10:53AM Title: The Price of Proper Presents I've read several of the reviews for this chapter and I think that most of the people who have responded negatively about Molly tackling Harry just don't have kids of their own. The simple fact is, no matter what, if someone were running off with your child, it doesn't really matter who, now...it could be the mother Theresa fo Calcutta, YOU would do everything in your power to stop that person. This is especially true for mothers. Harry being injured was incidental, the goal was to 'save' Ginny and at that point all rational thinking had ceased. Plain and simple. Some of the worst/most vicious animal attacks on humans were when the offspring of the attacking animal were perceived to have been threatened. This is perfectly understandable and actually, the most likely way an overprotective^2, Molly Weasley would reaact--like a mother bear seeing her cub threatened. Reviewer: Nyeshet Signed Date: 2006.09.26 - 08:45PM Title: The Price of Proper Presents In regards to what "whatareyouevensaying" asked, I use Live Bookmarks (a Firefox thing, akin to RSS feeds, I think). Every evening I check the bookmark, seeing a list of every story updated - up to about 5 min ago. So it is always displaying the ~30 most recently updated stories. That's usually enough to go back 1-3 days in terms of updates. If a new chapter shows up, I know about it as soon as I check the bookmark, and often I check it twice a day. Reviewer: UnorthodoxConvention Signed Date: 2006.09.26 - 02:41AM Title: The Price of Proper Presents Very well written... kept me hooked for hours!! Terrific :) Reviewer: noylj Signed Date: 2006.09.25 - 09:21PM Title: The Price of Proper Presents That's it? I was hoping that the story was much further along. You have written about the only fanfic I have read where Bill is a fool and a prat. You've done this while making Ron less of a prat than JK. Reviewer: TrueBlueJP90 Signed Date: 2006.09.25 - 05:10PM Title: The Price of Proper Presents Exuse my language, but Bloody Buggering Hell! I did not see this coming at all. Very well written. Reviewer: whatareyouevensaying Signed Date: 2006.09.24 - 08:32PM Title: The Price of Proper Presents This is quite possibly the greatest piece of fanfiction I've ever read. I can't think of any praise greater than that, but if I could, I'd type it here as well. I'm a bit curious as to whether or not you've got this story posted elsewhere, because this site doesn't have chapter alerts to my knowledge, which is a bit annoying. | |||||||
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