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Reviewer: mamu2 Signed Date: 2010.09.29 - 01:11PM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

This is well written. I hope we don't have to go through his rehab again though. That was tedious the first time around from the car accident and to have to read it again would slow the story way down.



Reviewer: snoopygonewilder Signed Date: 2008.10.01 - 05:32PM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

I was wondering if your posting the next chapter soon? I know writing takes time but im waiting, I guess many are waiting. Are you close to posting?

Also, I lose your story, GREAT!!!!

-Brenda G



Reviewer: snoopygonewilder Signed Date: 2008.09.11 - 12:28AM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

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There are a few FanFics that have made it into my HALL OF GOLD, I have to say you have made it in. I've read plenty of fanfictions over the matter of years. But with school and work I usually stop reading them for a long time. I had added you maybe a year ago or less to my favorites, but never actually got pass the first two chapters. I continued maybe two or three weeks ago, and let me tell you WOW. It was amazing, I have read the whole 57 chapters, I know I didn't review each one, but it just seem I would probably say the same thing over and over again, considering it took me a day or two sometimes to finish each chapter, because I have no time, unless is between classes, or my few hours of free time, which are less and less each day.

Normalcy is an amazing story, full of drama, love and everything anyone could expect from a good novel. I considered this a novel, and not just a FanFic. I loved Deathly Hollows, but this could totally have passed for book seven. Characters were well developed, and three dimensional (Nothing I hate more than a flat two-dimensional character agh) I liked that Harry and Dudley made peace in the end, hopefully he'll get to see his cousin again, and Dudley can find a way to get close to Harry, considering he's the only family he has left besides his aunt Marge.

Ginny was great, although I wished she hadn't been left behind in all the battles, (Secret: Ginny is one of my favorite characters) I think she's delightfully fierce and more than capable, even more than some of her brothers.

I was sad about Carlie's death, I was in the computer lab at school reading it and it was so sad, I was pushing in the tears. I didn't want to be the random student crying in the middle of the computer lab for no apparent reason.

Also one last thing, because I think I might be writing a novel of my own here.

I think Harry's twister side was delightful. Watching him fight between his good and bad was great, the pain was palpable and the struggle was heartbreaking to read.

Well that's it, I know this is a long review, but its to make up for the 46 I didn't write before, worry about that.

-Brenda(G)p

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! Reviews like this mean the world to me. And I'm glad you've come back to this story and have enjoyed it. Thanks!



Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.09.08 - 10:01AM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

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ginny was sitting on his right, so has he got both arms back or just his left???? mmmm, i dunno. i will just have to wait for the next chapter like everone else! i am have now caught up!!!! and i hope you don't leave me in suspense for too long!!! i have thouroughly enjoyed this story and its very original!!!!

another 10/10 me thinks!

Author's Response: He just has his left back. It was recovered from the rubble, so the healers were able to reattach it. And I'm glad you're caught up on this and hopefully the next chapter won't take too long to get out. Thanks!



Reviewer: Nuvisionary Signed Date: 2008.09.02 - 11:04AM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

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I hate you - I love you - I hate you - I love you!! You have had me all over the place. The tears have been hard ones - and the joys have felt right!
I love that your Harry is so strong and able to recover from everything thrown his way - Your end of Voldemort was SO HARD TO READ!! - I just wanted it to end - in a good way :-) Kill HIM HARRY - was all I could say.
I've been following your progress and love it - Yes there are times I want to come through the computer screen and shake you - but that must mean you are a very good artist!



Reviewer: bengpotter31 Signed Date: 2008.08.31 - 08:49PM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

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This was a great chapter, well worth the wait. I like the way you wrote Harry's state and how he felt waking up from his coma. I'm glad they were able to reattach his severed arm, though I don't see what they did to the one with the mechanical one. Well done. I look forward to the next one. You've certainly redeemed yourself after those awful happenings in chapters 48 to 54.

Author's Response: Well I'm glad the wait wasn't too tortuous for you! And as far as what is going on with his right...it'll be explained in the next chapter and he will regain the ability to use a prosthetic. Thanks!



Reviewer: he_who _is_terry Signed Date: 2008.08.31 - 04:04PM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

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love the chapter title, not sure where you got the inspiration for it, but its word for word from a Panic at the Disco song, Camisado, one of my fav songs by them

Author's Response: It is actually taken from the song, Camisado by Panic at the Disco. And the title for the next chapter is taken from there too. it's been a big inspiration for this story!



Reviewer: adlert Signed Date: 2008.08.31 - 03:20PM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

I read this story and almost stopped reading fan fiction after. Yours simply took the cake. Well done and I hope you keep writting.

Author's Response: I assure you there are tons of great stories out there and ones better than this one! So don't stop reading! Thanks!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2008.08.30 - 05:58PM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

well i have to say this is a good start for harry and ginny should ahve been there but then again harry would neever have woken up and then they would still be waiting for harry....kutgw hope harry makes a speedy recovery...



Reviewer: rel Signed Date: 2008.08.30 - 11:33AM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

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I was so sad when Harry died and when he first decided to stay dead. I am so glad that it will be allright. I was basically crying the entire story, but it was so good I couldn't stop reading. You are an amazing writer. Please, update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! And hopefully the next chapter will be up sometime next week!



Reviewer: redheaded_brat Signed Date: 2008.08.30 - 10:55AM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

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Another great chapter!

I have to say though..... it's nice to end a chapter of your story with a smile and no tears!

;-)

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2008.08.30 - 10:35AM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

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Yay teh chapter is here yay! So. Very. Lovely. I just enjoyed it. I think i enjoyed the contrast it was to the beginning of the story when Harry was banged up. I want more, I cannot be satisfied - clearly! I just loved the H/G interactions they were lovely, lovely.

Author's Response: Yes...things are a lot more subdued and less chaotic than they were in the beginning. Things are going to be hard, but there's a lot to look forward to now. Not so much darkness lol. Thanks!



Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2008.08.30 - 01:12AM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

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Reviewer: sockless Signed Date: 2008.08.30 - 12:42AM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

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Looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oove it!!!! Perfect as usual!

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2008.08.30 - 12:35AM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

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Very nice...I'm so glad he's awake, alive and on the road to recovery.

Author's Response: Yes Harry is most certainly on his way to recovery and we are on our way to the end! Thanks!



Reviewer: FredsGirl Signed Date: 2008.08.30 - 12:23AM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

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I had to go back and reread the end. I thought I had read that she touched his fingertips, but then I realized that he shouldn't have an arm and I didn't remember reading that in the beginning. That was a great present. Thank you! (And I'm sure Harry thanks you too!)

This was a great chapter. Harry's recovering and the first person he asked for was Ginny! You really know how to satisty your fluff loving readers...hehe! And I love that he cursed at the healer. That was funny! And, of course, Harry has to apologize for making everyone worry. What a silly boy and we love him!!!

I was actually thinking about this story earlier today. I told myself that I was going to check on your website to see what your progress was as soon as I got to a computer. Needless to say, I was pleasantly surprised when I read an email that this had been updated.

Thanks for another fantatic and satistying chapter. Can't wait for the next update!!!

Jen

Author's Response: Yeah...I hoped people caught on to the gift I left both them and harry lol. And after so much angst, we needed fluff....even i needed fluff. Thanks and hopefully the next chapter will be out soon. I've had a lot of time to write these past few days!



Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2008.08.29 - 11:29PM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

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Oh, I breathed a sigh of relief to learn that Harry had at least one natural arm reattached plus both legs that would work for him after some therapy. Those medi witches can perform some real magic !!!!It was heartwarming to see Harry and Ginny share their love which you know will be behind Harry's perservence when therapy becomes extremely challenging. Loved Remus' devotion to Harry. The slowed pace of this chapter gave us a feel for Harry's slow progress out of his coma. Having Harry and Ginny share some light humor near the end gave us hope that Harry's decision to return was the right choice and that together they will share happiness even though life may not be perfect. Looking forward to those happy highlights in the epilogue. As always, you've delivered another amazing chapter.

Author's Response: You're right in foreshadowing that we're not fully done with tough times. Harry's recovery, although he's awake now, is going to be a long and strenuous one and it will take all the support his friends can supply. Thank you!



Reviewer: Elvenlaughter Signed Date: 2008.08.29 - 11:26PM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

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*cries* No, no ending! This has to go on forever, right? *pouts* Fine, be that way. Hooray that he has an arm! That's fabulous! I was so hoping they'd be able to restore at least that one. And is Ginny REALLY going to try that in a hospital room when people could walk in at any moment? Is that wise? Hmmm... You should include that in the next chapter; Harry's nervousness, etc. It would be really sweet. That is, if that's what you meant by gift. If not, then just forget everything I said in the last few lines.
As for thanking us for sticking with you, seriously, it's us who should be thanking you for providing us with such an adventure! I just know I'm going to feel bereft when this is over...
Sequel? Maybe?

Author's Response: As much as I'd like to keep writing this...I'm running out of places to go lol. And the gift is the arm lol. But don't think I didn't dream up some sort of sweet moment like that lol...And there probably won't be a sequel to this, maybe some missing moments. But I have a lot more ideas that could be turned into stories. So we'll see what the future holds!



Reviewer: wolfsgurl Signed Date: 2008.08.29 - 11:14PM Title: Chapter 57: This Was No Accident...This Was a Theraputic Chain of Events

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