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Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2012.08.20 - 10:42PM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy JACOB! Oh really now Reviewer: mamu2 Signed Date: 2010.09.28 - 04:51PM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy I don't think Harry would be in any shape to do anything after suffering all those injuries...arm ripped off, arm cut off, run through the midsection with a sword. He'd be in shock and would have bled out in minutes. You kind of lost me there trying to suspend belief for all that. Also... Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.09.08 - 07:21AM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy one word - Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.09.08 - 07:19AM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy one word - Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.09.08 - 07:18AM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy one word - Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe Signed Date: 2008.06.16 - 05:37PM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy Alright, for starters the first thing I loved about this chapter is that the language was absolutely beautiful and the descriptive imagery was lovely to read and take in. We've all been waiting for this exciting climax since chapter one and I must say I was not at all disappointed. Even though I feel Harry suffered a little too much and with bit more gore than I really like, but it made for an epic scene and highly anticipated moment that surpassed my expectations. It was sweet for Tonks to have her baby now, during this time of chaos, destruction, and death, because Jacob represents the beginning that they're all fighting for. Also, Hermione getting hurt and leaving the battle, while I'm not sure why it was necessary, was well done, thank god you didn't kill her. Harry's internal commentary was very enjoyable, especially when he was preparing himself to kill Voldemort and when he finally fell on the sword. Great job! Reviewer: mworth1019 Signed Date: 2008.06.02 - 11:18PM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy What the heck?? THis can not be the end.. what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please tell me it is not done.. that would be cruel... good story..Really liked it until now! Reviewer: annep Signed Date: 2008.06.02 - 05:49PM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy The battle scene was very well done. Rather extreme method for getting rid of the Dark Mark! The part that really made me wince was when Harry’s prosthetic arm was ripped off, that was just horrific. The horcrux tempting him to not kill Voldemort or himself was also very wrenching—poor Harry was battling not only physically but also mentally and emotionally. Harry's sacrifice was perfect, it fit his character and comes from the "power the Dark Lord knows not". Reviewer: Elvenlaughter Signed Date: 2008.05.27 - 05:53PM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy You never cease to amaze and astound. This was a phenomenal chapter, and I absolutely loved the ending of the duel. I mean, I'm a sucker for hurt!heroic!Harry any day, but this was beautiful as well, and strange and unbelievable. I only just now finally got around to reading it, and it was well worth the wait. This entire story has been a thrill, and although I'm sad that it is coming to an end so soon (I'm guessing maybe one or two more chapters?) I'm sure it will end satisfactorily, and that's really all I can ask for, isn't it? Reviewer: lisa_lovegood Signed Date: 2008.05.26 - 02:06PM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy Wow...that was...wow... Reviewer: PrincessLeianna Signed Date: 2008.05.24 - 10:43PM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy LOL im doing it again. WOW i cant believe it ahhh i was shaking noooo harrry cant die pllzzz. HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO ME????? This was the most amazing chapter ive ever read. Reviewer: PrincessLeianna Signed Date: 2008.05.24 - 10:33PM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy AHHHH i hate it when you do this lol. Wow i cant wait for the next chapter plzzzz hurryy . I just found myself no stoping reading. So harry killed himself i guess. Reviewer: FredsGirl Signed Date: 2008.05.23 - 09:32PM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy Sorry, I forgot your stars. :) Reviewer: FredsGirl Signed Date: 2008.05.23 - 09:31PM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy Huh. I don't know what I think about this. Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2008.05.23 - 08:23AM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy As if this story wasn't intense enough, I had a 4 hour power failure just as I was reading the sword fight!!! I liked how you volleyed the success or failure of this fight back and forth between H and V. Using the sword of G.G. was fitting as it was also a significant part of Harry's past. If there is hope for H, I hope it might come from the fact he sacrificed himself on that very sword. Was Harry's inner voice that questioned his need to kill himself after killing V really that part of Voldemort in Harry's head that was used to control Harry while he was a death eater? Or am I reading too much into that? I was happy that you removed Hermione from the final battle. Harry's horrific death was not a scene that she could live with in her head, for the rest of her life. Once the story reached the part of V spearing Harry, I could actually see the scene as if in slow motion. JKR made a big issue of the veil in her story but never followed up with it's significance but you used it nicely here. The voices in the original book were never explained but I was happy to see you used them to calm Harry and helped him accept his death. Also, was the blinding white light that engulfed H and V plus the shaking of the death chamber supposed to be the power struggle of Light vs Dark? As I stated in my first review I felt this chaper was superb, magnificently written with impressive detail. I sat looking at the screen for a long time just thinking about this chapter. I know you have written Harry into a horrific life but I am holding out hope that all may not be lost for our beloved hero. There is still so much to be written following the aftermath of the battle. Just how will Ginny receive this news??? And what regrets will Ron, Hermione, Remus, the Weasley's and the rest of the wizarding world have regarding Harry's fall. I do hate waiting for the resolution of great cliff hangers but they are what make me return to your story as well. Plus I learn the art of patience as we know you too have a life separate of this wonderful story. Waiting on pins and needles. Reviewer: mjc Signed Date: 2008.05.23 - 05:37AM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy All right, this is getting ridiculous...Cliffs of Insanity, type thing. This story has been a series of ever steepening cliff hangers. Please, just one chapter that doesn't end in a cliffie? Reviewer: zoemcfoe Signed Date: 2008.05.23 - 02:37AM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy ACK! The cliffhanger to end all cliffhangers! Oh, now that's just cruel. :-) Reviewer: sockless Signed Date: 2008.05.23 - 02:30AM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy OH MY GAWD!!!!!!!!!!!! so not cool!!! i'm speechless! amazing par usual, but really? really? NOT COOL! Reviewer: blackwritingquill Signed Date: 2008.05.23 - 02:13AM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy Oh my god, what a chapter. What a fight...what an ENDING! God, that was ...intense, I guess would be the word that I'm looking for. I don't know. I'm mostly speechless here. Great job, keep up the good work! Reviewer: elaithin Signed Date: 2008.05.23 - 01:59AM Title: Chapter 53: Poetic Tragedy Now THAT is a confrontation well worth it! Masterfully done, sir! - Patrick | |||||||
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