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Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.09.06 - 03:33PM Title: Chapter 42: Long December

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well, that was very different to DH, but i liked it! if this was a book, i wouldn't be able to put it down, so instead i am sitting at the computer! and unable to close it down hehe



Reviewer: monkeyboy Signed Date: 2007.10.21 - 05:06PM Title: Chapter 42: Long December

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Thanks for coming back to us. Great story. Just don't leave us with another 3 month cliffie.

Author's Response: It should only be a few more days until the next update...do hold tight!



Reviewer: bricat Signed Date: 2007.10.18 - 02:20AM Title: Chapter 42: Long December

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I have been enjoying this story for a long time. I can say without a doubt that this, by far, is my favorite chapter though. Good work, can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the continued reading and I hope the next chapter lives up to this one!



Reviewer: tenorspaz Signed Date: 2007.10.14 - 04:07PM Title: Chapter 42: Long December

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Great Chapter!! The long wait was worth it, although it made for a long, long night in a cold forest for our heros. Heh...
Loved Helga and discovering the castle. Besides finding the cup, it gives them a chance to rest and regain their strength. I wouldn't be suprised if Ron's feet are healed.
Can't wait for the next chapter. I almost dread what price the cup will exact from Harry. You are so creative, I'm sure it will be a doozie!!
Sooo glad you're back!!
~~Spazzy~~

Author's Response: Hey! Nice to see you back here again and sorry for making you all wait so long. I hope the next chapters up in a few days, and yes...Harry will have to give something...but perhaps not something so obvious...hahahaha (evil, halloween laugh)



Reviewer: harrypotterspirit Signed Date: 2007.10.11 - 09:44PM Title: Chapter 42: Long December

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Thank you for returning with renewed vigor. With the cup in hand I am now awaiting to read about it's destruction and move on with their adventure.

Author's Response: Thank you for the warm welcome and I can assure you, you won't be waiting all too long for the next adventure.



Reviewer: The Seeker Signed Date: 2007.10.10 - 08:06PM Title: Chapter 42: Long December

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First of all, welcome back, Amanda! You've been missed. This was a wonderfully described chapter. The contrast between the two worlds was well depicted -- the colorless, silent, foodless, harsh, almost killing forest as contrasted to the soft, green, magical, and ultimately friendlier valley, where death actually meant life for the castle's inhabitants. Helga Hufflepuff was portrayed in an appropriately ethereal manner, and you vividly conveyed her meeting with Harry.

Best of all, it appears no one lost a body part, though Ron may still be at risk, and the horcrux needs to be destroyed, so you still have opportunities.

One question: Why did HH allow Tom to place a bit of his soul in her cup? Just curious.

Hoping to see the next chapter soon! -- Jim

Author's Response: Thanks for the warm welcome back! I'm glad that my version of Helga Hufflepuff has been so well recieved thus far! As for your question: Riddle placed the soul in the cup before he came seeking out its powers.



Reviewer: elaithin Signed Date: 2007.10.10 - 03:15AM Title: Chapter 42: Long December

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Fantastic! I love your portrayal of Hufflepuff. the sense of otherworldly magic, and of Harry confronting the fact that he's a Horcrux, are both very well handled. Also - Harry's reactions to waking up as a lion and Hermione and Ron being gone were excellently done as well.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!



Reviewer: ahdunnoy Signed Date: 2007.10.09 - 09:46PM Title: Chapter 42: Long December

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I'd say the last line was the clincher. :-) great chapter!

One thing I would like to add is this...I think you have modelled Helga Hufflepuff after Galadriel from LoTR. Not in a bad sense of course, but I do find some uncanny similarities between the two portrayals. And for someone like me who is a huge fan of all the 3 the series (LoTR, HP and HPFF), I think this is definitely a good thing.

-Ciao

Author's Response: The last line was a last minute add on. I couldn't think of a way to end the chapter that seemed right after I'd rained on Harry's parade enough in the chapter. So I decided on a bit of encouragement. And the whole comparison between HH and Galadriel, I totally hadn't thought of that intentionally. But now you mention it...I do so really striking similiarites. As a fellow LOTR fan, I can say I'm a bit shocked I didn't notice it before, but I'm glad it's a good thing!



Reviewer: dejavu Signed Date: 2007.10.09 - 09:24PM Title: Chapter 42: Long December

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yes, I like this chapter. I always wait alot for a new one, but every time I read it I always enjoy it.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad I haven't scared anybody away with being away for so long. I'm thankful for your continued reading!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.10.09 - 05:20PM Title: Chapter 42: Long December

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well now its time for them to work on healing of ron and time to deal with what is left in the world that voldy needs to stay alive.....kutgw glad ur back...hope rons feet are ok now...maybe they healed them for ron so they can go home....in one piece for molly to skin them alive....

Author's Response: I can honestly say that Ron's feet are still not completely safe and yes Molly will have something to say about it. Thanks for the review! And I'm glad I'm back too!



Reviewer: nalaniekeala Signed Date: 2007.10.09 - 02:12PM Title: Chapter 42: Long December

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Welcome back! It quite made my morning to see an update, even though it took until now for me to get enough time to read it. LOL Good chapter though, well worth the wait.

Author's Response: Thanks! and I hope very soon to have you wake up with another update!



Reviewer: Elvenlaughter Signed Date: 2007.10.09 - 12:59PM Title: Chapter 42: Long December

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AWESOME!!

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.10.09 - 07:18AM Title: Chapter 42: Long December

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yaaaaa they found the castle! and the cup! whoopie! pretty awesome! so good chapter! can't wait to read more! hope you update soon!

CodeRomance

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like the chapter. You don't know how much I wanted to get it out and how much it pained me not to be able to deliver for so long. Thanks!




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