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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.05.19 - 02:42PM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

That sounded an awful experience...i think i prefer basalisk fangs...much. easiet and less painful (lol)

I'm intruiged about what he gave up...i dread to think it means he gave up ginnys love.



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.05.19 - 02:31PM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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That sounded an awful experience...i think i prefer basalisk fangs...much. easiet and less painful (lol)

I'm intruiged about what he gave up...i dread to think it means he gave up ginnys love.



Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.09.05 - 05:54PM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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ooooh, very intersting!



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.08.25 - 11:20PM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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i hope he didnt loose his eyes cuz that would suck..i mean on top of everything else! you're being very cruel to him!

CodeRomance



Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe Signed Date: 2007.04.01 - 10:37AM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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I've been reading your story for a few weeks now and I am thoroughly and utterly hooked. To start off, the car crash, Harry's injuries, and his relationship with Dudley afterwards are extremely creative and interesting aspects, though they are a little abstract. Harry's growing relationship with Ginny is written superbly. You bring up the crucial concepts of their love and how the war affects it so much and have a great balance of them being just normal teenagers and a couple dealing with a war and a prophecy. I loved in the last chapter when Harry came back to Hogwarts and startled Ginny, Tonks, and Remus by joining in their conversation from under the invisibility cloak. One of my favorite moments. I've read a lot of different theories on R.A.B., the locket, Kreacher, and Dung, and I've seen many different ways an author has illustrated the trio retrieving the locket. I have to say that this is a good theory, especially the way that you incorporated the "Wizard Maufia" and Dung's trouble finally catching up to him. I don't think that Harry will go blind (but considering the fact that you had his arm amputated I wouldn't put it past you) and I'm excited to see what's in story for the next chapter!

Miss Radcliffe~



Reviewer: Elvenlaughter Signed Date: 2007.03.20 - 06:35PM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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Oh... my... word... so, Harry's going to be blind now, isn't he? Yipes, does it ever stop for the poor guy? The beautiful thing is that we know Ginny will still love him. Do please update this soon, it's so suspenseful (which is good, but annoying, if you get my meaning) I love your writing, good work, etc.



Reviewer: tenorspaz Signed Date: 2007.03.19 - 06:57AM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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Omigawd! More angsty goodness! And that was an EVIL cliffie you left us hanging with, Darlin. Reminded me of the cliffs you had us hanging off of at the beginnning of the story.
Loved the Harry/Dumbledoor reunion, from the cute and fluffy love talk to the chock-full-of-anger confrontation. Great idea having the horcrux demand payment. I haven't seen that in any other book 7 fic yet. Lordy, byt the time Harry's done with all of them, he'll be in awful shape. Better let somebody else open one! ;-)

Another fab chapter from my favorite author. So sorry to hear about YOUR latest angst. Girl, you must be a fierce ball player! Will we be seing you on the WNBA? Seriously, hang in there and take it easy. Look on the bright side...at least you can still type.
Spazzy


Author's Response: I am quite the evil cliff leaver aren't I? Actually...It probably could have been longer but it was driving me nuts to leave everyone hanging for so long. And I wouldn't say that I'm that fierce...I just jump into stupid situations w/o thinking about the bodily harm. And no WNBA. Bball's always been just for fun and I go to a junior college...so I doubt they're looking in the Middle of Nowhere Wisconsin for talent. hehe. Thanks! And I hope you enjoy the next installment when it comes out.



Reviewer: Harrysgiirl Signed Date: 2007.03.18 - 10:01PM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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omg i just spent all weeking reading your entire fic and its the best one ive ever read i love it!
i hope harry doesnt lose his sight, i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! I love to hear when reader pull an all weekend to read this fic. I've spent a lot of time on it and it makes me feel so good. Thanks!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2007.03.18 - 02:49PM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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well now its to bad that harry forgot about the diary or that ginny was apart of it....hope he pulls thought...albus will need to remeber that he is dead and not everyone thinks like him...he needs to go down a peg or 2...kutgw



Reviewer: Katastrophe Signed Date: 2007.03.17 - 06:07AM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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You poor thing. I do hope your jaw heals quickly.

Excellent chapter! But please tell me that Harry won't be blind too. You can't kick him so hard when he's already down. Will be watching for the next chapter!

Michelle

Author's Response: The jaw is healing. Only a few more weeks until the wires come out and I can eat real food again! Yeah! I really enjoyed writing this chapter. It was a release for me after a few tough weeks...So I'm glad is was so well recieved and I hope I didn't leave you all hanging on too much. The next Chapter should be out sometime next week.



Reviewer: thisgrlrox Signed Date: 2007.03.17 - 12:31AM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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I'm amazed that you were able to get this chapter out with that type of injury. I know it can be difficult to dig your way out of a mountain of schoolwork also. Bravo!

Kudos also for the chapter. I was especially impressed with the destruction of the Horcrux. How very like Voldemort to demand payment of some sort. Nice interpretation of cannon there. I hope Harry's eyes are okay though. I can't imagine yet another obstacle in his mission. He's dealing with so much already.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter...no matter how long it takes.

Author's Response: I'm lucky that it wasn't quite mid-term when it happened...so I really didn't have a whole lot except for reading I'd neglected. But I'm doing so much better and the jaw is healing wonderfully. So thanks! I'm about 1/4 the way through the next chapter...I have it all planned out...so I hope to have it out sometime next week. I really hope everyone enjoys what "Payment" Harry has had to make. Thanks again!



Reviewer: IHateSnakes Signed Date: 2007.03.16 - 09:37PM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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Excellent. S.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Milk Signed Date: 2007.03.16 - 07:24PM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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arrrrrggghhhhhhhhhhhhh! i hope he's going to be okay. and i really hope more comes soon. oh, and he does not loose his beautiful eyes or his eyesight.

Author's Response: Harry will live...but at what cost? I'll just have to keep you on tenterhooks waiting...hahaha



Reviewer: HMSChocolate Signed Date: 2007.03.16 - 06:35PM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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I hope you're feeling better though I have a feeling that your therapy was to inflict more pain on poor Harry :P Please don't make Harry blind. Though it would prove him to be rather a lot if he does become blind, has one arm and still manages to defeat LV. Great chapter. Love the conversation on love and the relationships with Dumbledore

Author's Response: It was really therapy to get back to writing after a few weeks of makeup school work and feeling like crap most of the time. And in a sick way...making Harry suffer was my release! hehe. As for Harry being blind...that would be very melodromatic and quite a bit to get over...but we'll just have to wait to see if I really am that mean! Thanks!



Reviewer: Wolfric Signed Date: 2007.03.16 - 04:15PM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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I like this chapter a great deal. I wonder if Dumbledor's portrait will figure in the last book? Anyway I think the struggle with the locket is well done. I do hope we don't have Harry permanetly blinded. Thanks. W.

Author's Response: Thanks! And I am so excited to see how Dumbledore's portrait figures in. I read in an interview recently where Dan Radcliffe had a conversation with JK about her troubles with Dumbledore in writing DH. I think Dan said something to the effect of "Isn't he dead?" and Jo answered that it wasn't as simple as that. So I'm excited to. And I'm glad you liked this chapter.



Reviewer: Pennilyn Novus Signed Date: 2007.03.16 - 03:54PM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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I don't know how much more suffering on Harry's part I can take! You're worse on this kid than Jo is! *grin* Excellent writing. Youve got me so concerned about the characters now that I'm on pins and needles to know if Harry will now need two Moody-esque glass eyes. Yikes!

Author's Response: I am quite mean to Harry aren't I? Though sometimes...even though it is a bit harsh to say...but Harry comes out of some situations relatively physically unscathed...when he shouldn't. So I'm sadistic I know...but he has to suffer a bit. I hope you enjoy the next upcoming chapter



Reviewer: jadesabrexiv Signed Date: 2007.03.16 - 12:17PM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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i hope you get over your injury quickly and without complications. thanx for the new chapter

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Marauder Evans Signed Date: 2007.03.16 - 11:19AM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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Aww, sorry about your jaw. Hope you're ok, aye, gotta love the astonauts food >< ! Hmm, I have to agree with what Elementum said; You love damaging Harry, aye? Just hope he's not blind, which I doubt, but argh! Update soon, and it was worth the wait!

Author's Response: The jaw is healing good....just a few more weeks and I'll be good. And yes...fruit smoothies and ice cream are a wonderful diet! hehe. And is Harry blind? I don't know...we'll all have to wait it out



Reviewer: Ginzig1 Signed Date: 2007.03.16 - 11:07AM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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Wow, I hope you are doing okay; that sounds awful. Great chapter! Fabulous descriptions. I was very caught up in it while Harry held the locket and all the white light. So, does this mean Harry will be blind? I hope not. I loved the beginning with the couples bickering. Very funny, especially when the spotlight was taken off Ron and placed on Harry. hehehe Can't wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: I'm doing a lot better now. It's just the annoyance of not being able to talk real clearly and not being able to eat anything of real substance that sucks about it...but I'm doing good. I've got more time for writing too. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Even though it took a long time to get out because of real life things...I had to make sure that the descriptions were right and accurate so I'm glad it worked out. And as for Harry bing blind...we'll just all have to wait and see along with him....hehe.



Reviewer: Elementum Signed Date: 2007.03.16 - 10:19AM Title: Chapter 35: Dissolve and Decay

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The long wait was worth it. =) That was intense! Poor Harry...I certainly hope he isn't blind now too.

You just love damaging this boy huh?

Author's Response: I do love causing Harry a bit of pain don't I? But as for Harry being blind...we'll just have to wait and see won't we?




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