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Reviewer: StrawberrySwirls Signed Date: 2008.07.29 - 01:42AM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
Dumbledore is brilliant with the clock-thing he did at the very end. :D I was grinning the entire time. And, I am in total and complete love with their bond; it should make their upcoming relationship even easier. :)
Strawberry ^^
Reviewer: snoopygonewilder Signed Date: 2008.04.11 - 10:28AM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
Very nice, I liked the bit about Madame Pomfrey making all the sudgestions, and arguing and getting Molly Weasley involved.... Good chapter again....
Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.11.17 - 12:49AM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.10.13 - 02:48PM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
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Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2007.09.24 - 05:14PM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
This was so great! I love how each thing that's changed from how canon has it makes something else change. (Kind of like the theory that if you go back in time and change one thing, there are ripple effects every where.) For example, Harry buying Ron a new wand makes it possible for Ron's "eat slugs" curse to work on Malfoy, instead of rebounding on Ron. Also, that instead of Ron & Harry missing the Hogwarts Express, it ends up being Ginny & Harry almost missing it, but they don't. I also love how, because of Harry's friendship, Ginny has a much better first year (so far, at least, since I haven't read more than two chapters) and doesn't end up relying totally on Riddle's diary for companionship. I also liked how because Harry makes her brothers let her play Quidditch with them at the Burrow, her whole family realizes how excellent a flyer she is, early on. Anyway, I'll stop gushing about everything I'm enjoying about this story. : ) I'm just really happy I happened to find it to read, since it's so cool. : )
Reviewer: The Seeker Signed Date: 2007.04.27 - 08:53PM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
If anything, this chapter was better than the first. Not better, that's too qualitative and insults the first chapter. Number two was funny and cute and charming. Your idea -- the bond between H and G -- is so creative, and the way you're expressing their relationship makes it so real . . . and funny. Another distinguishing quality is how you pull in canon, then twist it back on itself, so I'm sitting here trying to read while laughing.
Another fun thread is the sleuthing DD is doing, plus the concerned and slightly startled reactions of Molly, Hermione, and Ron. All of these add welocme flavorings to your story, and make it so enjoyable to read. On to three!!!
Author's Response: Excellent! I hope you find the rest of the story gets better as it goes along.
Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.02.04 - 06:37PM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
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Reviewer: gryffindor_girl101 Signed Date: 2007.02.03 - 05:56PM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
AAAWWW!!! I was smiling practically the whole time!! THAT IS SOO SWEET!!! I love it!!! :D
Author's Response: Glad to hear it. I was rather tired of all the angst when I started writing it. ;P
Reviewer: Moonlight51 Signed Date: 2006.08.28 - 05:51PM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
:-) this is so cute. like the last chapter, i just keep smiling. i like how Molly just started to plan their wedding already, that was a nice touch. and that Ron caught on before too much longer. i especially like that the 'eat slugs' curse actually worked and that Malfoy got what he deserved. but, what did Dumbledore just do? o.O on to the next chapter!! :-D
Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.08.07 - 05:52PM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
Mrs. Weasley planning the wedding for Harry and Ginny, that's a good one, I love the story, and I can't wait to see what happens next, I wonder what Dumbledore knows that Harry and Ginny don't about there connetion...
Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Mad Hatter Anonymous Date: 2006.07.21 - 04:21AM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
Ooo, I'm intrigued! Dumbledore's thinking what I'm thinking, except I don't know what I'm thinking. When Harry explained his relationship with Ginny, I thought that it was the most perfect way ever of describing it, and I can relate to it. I'm in the exact same relationship with a guy right now, except he's not in my head, and I'm not in his. Anyway, I loved this chapter, and the fact that Ginny's not using the diary very much. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Intrigued is good. The diary comes into play later.
Reviewer: the_boy_who_loved Anonymous Date: 2006.06.07 - 04:32PM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
sorry ive only just started reading, but i prefer to have a couple of new chapters instead of just one, so...
great editing, i really liked it
Author's Response: Ok.
Reviewer: xo_morgie33 Signed Date: 2006.05.20 - 09:04AM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
I LOVE this story. This would make a very nice birthday present, if it were my birthday.
Author's Response: I\'m glad you like it!
Reviewer: MIssGinny Anonymous Date: 2006.05.08 - 02:26PM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
another excellent chapter! im really drawn into this and i relaly like how its playing out cant wait to read more
Author's Response: Excellent! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Enchantedgurls Signed Date: 2006.05.07 - 12:33AM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
What did pointing his wand at the wrist watch mean? I have to go read chapter 3 now. Great story, I really like reading about what could have happened. But the whole chamber thing isn't happening! Maybe that's a good thing lol. Well I better read chapter 3 before making assumptions. Really, really great writing. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Dumbledore set an alarm (he had no desire to be confronted by Madam Pomfrey). It isn\'t? you will see. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: HGFANATIC Anonymous Date: 2006.05.01 - 06:50PM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! It just shows their growing relationship. Excellent! It can't get any better than that. Off to the next! :)
`Felicity
Author's Response: Growing relationship indeed. Just wait until the next couple of chapters. Keep reading and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Reader4ever Anonymous Date: 2006.04.23 - 09:05PM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
3 words: Another great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Firebolt2006 Signed Date: 2006.04.15 - 11:07AM Title: CoS: Returning To Hogwarts
I've read a few other stories about a "Bonds" between Harry/Ginny, but not that followed the original JKR stories, this is a great twist. I really like it. Hope it stay as interesting as it is right now. Oh, what was with Dumbledore pointing his wand at Harrys watch?
Author's Response: Yes, I\'ve tried to put my own spin on it. Thanks for reviewing! Dumbledore pointing at Harry\'s watch? Well he didn\'t want Pomfrey to find them together, but he also did not want to disturb them...add a little magic to a watch and you have an alarm.
