Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2011.04.04 - 02:42PM Title: Chapter 5
I meant to say in my last review that I don't know if I'm getting confused but ginny dreams seemed to keep mentioning ! "she" which didn't appear to be ginny but the person controlling her...which I presumed to be the "he" of voldermort.
Reviewer: hiraishin4 Signed Date: 2010.08.27 - 01:06PM Title: Chapter 5
well, i'm a little dissapointed in how harry didn't make the seeker. Ginny didn't outplay him only he choose not to hurt her, And why are you downgrading his flying skills? Even as a newbie, he always new how to handle a broom. It has always been instinctual to him. Ginny is good because she's talented and she practiced. Harry on the other hand had onbly pure natural talent. Harry was the one to always do the stunts when flying. But you're making him a not so good flyer with a good eye for finding the snitch.
Reviewer: Katehc2 Signed Date: 2009.12.06 - 10:56PM Title: Chapter 5
I am really enjoying this story. I'm having a Bear-y Sunday, reading all your stories. I'll try and get caught up tomorrow.
Reviewer: annep Signed Date: 2009.11.30 - 04:42PM Title: Chapter 5
It doesn’t surprise me that Dumbledore didn’t share the blood test results with Remus. It would have been so shocking (for over a decade everyone has assumed that Harry died with his parents) that Albus would want independent confirmation of the results, without tainting Remus’ search with any possible answers. That’s what I would have done at any rate.
Reviewer: Feff Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 10:30PM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you for the update
Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 07:09PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm not sure I understand: Ginny got the snitch, Harry is appointed Reserve Seeker and George congratulates Ginny for getting the Seeker position?
Reviewer: Kage James Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 06:38PM Title: Chapter 5
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 06:08PM Title: Chapter 5
Good chapter, I'm a little disappointed that Adam didn't make the team. I think he needs that in his life. Too bad Remus has not made more headway in finding out who Adam is.
Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 03:47PM Title: Chapter 5
Nice!! Keep up the great writing.
Reviewer: hushpuppy22 Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 02:53PM Title: Chapter 5
Ginny getting the seeker spot doesn't fit with what we know of the characters since Harry in a natural flyer and seeker. Ginny is a great player but not a prodigy like Harry. Seeking seems to be about flying skills while chasing, which is Ginny's forte, is about competitiveness and ability to work with your team. We readers need a better reason to believe Ginny would have made seeker than she's flown longer than him. Everyone had flown longer than Harry in the books but that didn't stop him from getting seeker.
Reviewer: ginny92 Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 02:26PM Title: Chapter 5
I don't know how I feel about ginny getting the seekers spot. she's a chaser, that's what she's better suited for. "adam" is in my book the superior seeker. he has natural instinc's for the game. I hope there gets to be a chanc where ginny and harry both get to play at the same time. peace
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 02:19PM Title: Chapter 5
Great new chapter--interesting making Ginny Seeker instead of Adam.
Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 01:56PM Title: Chapter 5
At first, I thought something was wrong with Harry so that he was not as good a seeker as he'd been in JKR's books. However, I think the difference is that your Harry has learned to be careful while JKR's took crazy chances. That was illustrated very clearly in this chapter when Harry avoided the collision. This Ginny is too intent on proving herself and isn't a very good friend at the moment. Harry had good reason to be disappointed with her - she totally disregarded her friend's well being.
Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 01:51PM Title: Chapter 5
Reviewer: Lord Dreadnault Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 01:01PM Title: Chapter 5
Another great update. :)
Reviewer: NotACat Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 12:50PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm going to have to go back and see if you mentioned Adam having grey eyes before. I noticed the mention of his eyes by that staff member, but she didn't say what colour they are. We all know what colour we were expecting them to be ;-)
Reviewer: hp_fanatic Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 12:46PM Title: Chapter 5
I really wanted Adam to be the seeker. :(
Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 12:43PM Title: Chapter 5
Darn, I should have seen that coming! Good on ya. :D
Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 10:47AM Title: Chapter 5
Admas reflexes are in catching, and focus.
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2009.11.28 - 10:32AM Title: Chapter 5
Yeah, a game of "aerial chicken" doesn't seem all that appealing -- especially against a genuine friend; more so when one hasn't had many friends. It was rather nice of the twins to include Adam.