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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2011.04.04 - 02:17PM Title: Chapter 4

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I'm glad we got some news from remus....but I dont know if he'll ever get to the bottom of it. I can't help thinking pettigrew had something to do with young harrys escape.

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Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2009.11.27 - 04:29PM Title: Chapter 4

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i hope that they find out about Harry soon but what about two of my favorite characters Hedwig and Dobby are you leaving them out of the story

Author's Response: Dobby will definatly have an important part to play...... just not yet.



Reviewer: rahat5810 Signed Date: 2009.11.23 - 01:41AM Title: Chapter 4

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Nice writing. Waiting for the next chapter.

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Reviewer: nonym7 Signed Date: 2009.11.22 - 11:24PM Title: Chapter 4

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Excellent plot and good writing.

I would take a guess on why harry has no-name.
Either Voldm, sirius, peter or one of his parents put some kind of spell on him...

i would like to see how ppl react when they know 'harry potter' is alive and unknown...
assuming that they (except dubledor,Vold) didnt know that Adam is potter by then...
it will be a bigger uproar (finding and the searching) than just finding that Adam is potter..

Anyways, keep writing...

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Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2009.11.22 - 04:53AM Title: Chapter 4

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I am absolutely going to refrain myself on making any more guesses as to why Adam is unknown and why no Owl or AM-squad can find or detect him. I've decided to let you suprise me. :D

Loved the flying/Quidditch bit and I hope Adam will be chosen on the merrit of being a great Seeker and perhaps, if you are considering, Ginny as a reserve? Ron's going to be green then. :)

Remus has finaly started to delve deeper into the past of Adam but will he be able to go back far enough to find out how Adam got to be there in the first place and whom he actualy is.
And who will be this year's DADA teacher.

Until next time, take care.
C


Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I\'m not going to reveal who will be the seeker yet, but both of them will get to play in the coming year.



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2009.11.22 - 12:29AM Title: Chapter 4

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So Remus is acting as a detective, eh? Should keep him a bit occupied for a bit....

Good character interactions, BTW.

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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2009.11.21 - 09:32PM Title: Chapter 4

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Great chapter! I'm glad that Remus is investigating, hopefully he will find something out. Question - does he not look like James in your story?

Author's Response: Thanks! He probably does look somewhat like james, except with different hair colour, different eye colour, probably a lot shorter and skinnier than he was, at that age. No-one had put two and two together thought, probably because of the differences and probably because no-one beleive (with the possible exception of Dumbledore) that Harry Potter is alive.



Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2009.11.21 - 08:27PM Title: Chapter 4

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As always interesting. I don't see Remus discovering Adam's true identity. It doesn't sound like anyone would know that Adam is Harry--exccept for Dumbledore. He is only going to see that Adam is a good kid who has been treated badly. Really badly.

Another reason for Remus to be angry with Dumbledore is that he sent him off on this wild goose chase with inadequate information while not giving him the chance to teach at Hogwarts--which might have actually paid him unlike this pointless exercise. The nameless correspondence seems to be a pretty big clue that something has been done to Adam.

I do hope that Adam remains suspicious of Dumbledore and doesn't easily forgive him for how he has suffered. As near as I can tell, Dumbledore assumed he was dead, didn't look, didn't find, treated him with undeserved suspcion his first year, didn't support McG in looking for him, and completely failed to protect him when he was depending on him after his first year. Why should Dumbledore get a pass from anyone?

Looking forward to how it plays out.

I do like the fact that Ginny is competitve with Harry when they are on similar brooms--that makes sense. Adam has had more abuse than in canon, and doesn't have a better broom--and Ginny is supposed to be really good.

Author's Response: Thanks! In canon we never had any direct competition( I think) between thw two. So it will be interesting to see how the Quidditch trials play out.



Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2009.11.21 - 07:22PM Title: Chapter 4

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I can't think of any reason for Harry's ability to fly would be affected so I'm surprised that Ginny is faster. Are the broom equal? It was odd that she didn't understand Harry well but did understand the snake. Remus's investigation is a good way to go back and reveal the past. However, I was a little surprised that he compromised his ethics for his mission. Dumbledore must have been very persuasive which could make Remus's anger even worse when the truth is revealed.

Author's Response: Thanks! We will see more from Remus soon.



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2009.11.21 - 06:55PM Title: Chapter 4

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And an interestng search it will be.

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Reviewer: Professor_Chris Signed Date: 2009.11.21 - 06:34PM Title: Chapter 4

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Another great chapter... I am glad that the twins were willing to let Ginny play Quidditch, I am looking forward to her completely wiping the floor with Ron at some point :).

Looking forward to seeing what Remus learns in his search.

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Reviewer: Macsr71 Signed Date: 2009.11.21 - 05:56PM Title: Chapter 4

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Great story as usual, I'm a little confused by your gender in this part

It had been a frustratingly long evening waiting for her chance to take control of the girl. It wasn't until after the school had gone to sleep that her chance had come. The girl had been sitting in her room in Gryffindor tower, scribbling furiously in the diary. Once she had control of the girl's body Ginny had been able to sneak out of the common room unnoticed and .........

Should that not be HIS change to take control, HIS chance had come, once HE had control etc....

Anywho, great read..

Author's Response: What I put there, is what I meant to put if you get what I mean. I\'m trying to show the confusing circumstances of the dreams. Ginny(she) is watching Tom(who was a he when he had a body, but doesnt have a body right now) controlling Ginny\'s body(she).



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2009.11.21 - 05:06PM Title: Chapter 4

well at lease remus is working on figureing out the past...but albus is a screwy baster for not telling remus WHO ADAM IS>>>>....kutgw

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Reviewer: Feff Signed Date: 2009.11.21 - 05:03PM Title: Chapter 4

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Another great Chapter!

Thank you,
Feff

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Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2009.11.21 - 04:38PM Title: Chapter 4

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Dumbledore could make Remus' job a bit easier if he told him 'Adam' was really Harry Potter.

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Reviewer: Lord Dreadnault Signed Date: 2009.11.21 - 04:25PM Title: Chapter 4

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I'm curious about what sort of things Remus might dig up about Adam's past. I'm also wondering if anything will inspire Sirius to bust out.

Great chapter, I'm always happy to see an update notification for your story. :D

Author's Response: Thanks! We\'ll be seeing much more of Remus from this point now.



Reviewer: hp_fanatic Signed Date: 2009.11.21 - 04:22PM Title: Chapter 4

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great chapter! please update!

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Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2009.11.21 - 03:45PM Title: Chapter 4

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The past is coming back to haunt, but could it also set him free?

Look forward to more

And hopefully Sirius

Ja ne

Jim

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