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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.01.30 - 08:35PM Title: Chapter 4: Harsh Reality

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Very interesting chapter! I find myself rereading frequently as I try to find more meaning in the text. Harry is certainly a very different young man from Canon.



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.08.19 - 03:18PM Title: Chapter 4: Harsh Reality

Well done do think it should be quite amusing to see how this Prank war goes your playing a very good balance so far you have Harry mature yes but you also let him be a boy and have fun which I really don't think JK did you are doing a wonderful job congrats. Well done do think it should be quite amusing to see how this Prank war goes your playing a very good balance so far you have Harry mature yes but you also let him be a boy and have fun which I really don't think JK did you are doing a wonderful job on that front congrats. Though seems like Dumbledore and Harry are clashing quite a bit for just meeting hopefully they get this over.

Author's Response: You've left a whole chain of reviews. I'm going to lump them all together for one response . . .



Reviewer: crazyredhead Signed Date: 2007.04.16 - 08:35PM Title: Chapter 4: Harsh Reality

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very good

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.



Reviewer: Victor Aagaard Signed Date: 2006.12.24 - 11:01AM Title: Chapter 4: Harsh Reality

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This is amazing work through and through. Love the story.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're continuing to enjoy the story. Dare I assume you're caught up by now? Lots of hard work by the beta team has made this better than it would be. (Some of it is actually going back through beta, but that's another story...)



Reviewer: dan_luver Anonymous Date: 2006.11.18 - 01:10PM Title: Chapter 4: Harsh Reality

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I have no problem with your storie so far except this small -actualy it's quit huge- thing. WHY are you makeing Dumbledore so damn RETARDED

Author's Response: I'll fold my response for this into your next review...



Reviewer: Wooster Signed Date: 2006.09.17 - 11:18PM Title: Chapter 4: Harsh Reality

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Ok. No idea what is going on. And that's rare for me. Really rare. I'm excited about this story. I love your version of Harry...he's cynical, but he's also really funny. Great sense of the ridiculous. I can't wait to figure out all of what's going on.

But now...I must sleep. Blast the human body and its need to recharge.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving feedback. I'm glad you're enjoing the story, and unable to clearly anticipate what's coming next. I also hope it remains a fun ride all the way along for you..



Reviewer: Rocky235 Signed Date: 2006.09.01 - 09:13PM Title: Chapter 4: Harsh Reality

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Dang, Snape will get released? I guess all my prayers don't get answered.

I'm really enjoying your story.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and leaving feedback. I've responded to all your reviews based on the last one you left...



Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.08.25 - 04:53PM Title: Chapter 4: Harsh Reality

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What another great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next, I think the second prophecy is about Ginny, she sure has fire... can't wait to see that...

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I'm lumping all feedback for you under your last review.



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2006.06.16 - 08:27AM Title: Chapter 4: Harsh Reality

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Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.06.07 - 03:27AM Title: Chapter 4: Harsh Reality

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Well, I had to back track and review because I can't not review every chapter... as if you need to hear from me again. I see that someone else is thinking like I was, but I never did reply to you about that. I didn't necessarily think it referred exclusively to Harry. To say it was just Voldemort like Dumbledore did was too easy as Harry could fit it too. The question is, who all does it involve? I have my theories...
Chapter looks good Josh.
~ Christine

Author's Response: The fun part about that prophecy is it could fit more than just Harry and Dumbledore... but if you re-read what was said right before it, Dumbledore didn't claim that it was just about Ol' Snakey. He mentioned that the obvious references were possibly Voldemort, but that had no real opinions... Isn't that fun?

Author's Response: Hmmm, what that a Freudian slip? Read "Dumbledore" as "Voldemort". But I'll enjoy the conspiracy theories now.



Reviewer: Ima Quidditch Fan Signed Date: 2006.06.06 - 11:06AM Title: Chapter 4: Harsh Reality

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Reviewer: Tron Signed Date: 2006.06.06 - 10:46AM Title: Chapter 4: Harsh Reality

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Great chapter. I'm surprised no one reviewed it before me!

There was a lot of information in this chapter and some of it seems to be misleading.

The last prophecy didn't make me think of Voldemort. I thought of Harry. Harry is back (visibly) in the wizarding world and he is wrapped in blood and hatred. He has killed and plans to kill some more. I don't know about his power, but I don't think he's been playing hopscotch all these years in his training. His price could be something to do with being a War Mage or something else - the loss of parents and mentors are a terrible price. The world shattering before the battle could be the ideals of the wizarding world being put to the test or something more physical. I'm not sure about the choice or the pit of darkness unless Harry is in danger of becoming what he is fighting against. His wrath is great as he seems to be doing his best to clean up Voldemort's mess. The Chosen One must find the light or they all burn I think goes back to the prophecy about fire.

I'm really enjoying this story! It has action and adventure, mystery, and drama! Please update soon!


Author's Response: The lack of prior reviews is actually artifical... My excellent betas convinced me to split what was Ch3 into Ch3 and Ch4. So all the reviews for Ch3 are actually for both 3+4... but, thanks for reviewing.

That said, let me raise the same question I asked my beta. None of the other prophecies talk about just one person. Why would this one?

Glad you're enjoying the story.




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